Superawesomeamazing job so far! I really like how you shaped Adrie's character :) Update soon :P

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That was really good! Please Please Please continue!!! I am very intrigued :)

Author's Response: Next chapter is already in the validation queue! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)

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I really like it so far :) updat soon ;D

Author's Response: Next chapter is already in the validation queue! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)

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Oh, Love love love this story!! Soo excited to see how the bet plays out...
Great description, too. I could really see each of the characters!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, that's really encouraging. So glad you could see the characters because I have a tendency to overdo the description.
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I read the narrations in my head with a julia Andrews voice. Its official. The 3rd person narrative is infact Julia Andrews. Anywho. You have one typo where Julia Andrews narrates that Andri has two close friends, when Julia names off three. Other then that, there were none. I liked it a lot. Its an easy read. And away I go to read the second chapter.

Author's Response: Haha, I guess the narrations couldsound like her. That actually isn't a typo, she has two friends, "Kat and Alianna or Ali", Ali is Alianna's nickname. Glad you liked it and please continue reading.
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Some of the wording just sounds awkward so you may want to proof read and Adrienne and Sirius aren't very witty...
Other than that, (even though I know how this story will most likely turn out) I would really like if you continued.

Author's Response: Thanks, I know that there were a few minor errors, but I couldn't bring myself to face waiting for another week for validation. I promise that the story will get better because I couldn't think of a better way to introduce the characters. I have a surprise ending and a sequel planned so it may not turn out quite the way you expect.

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Scarlett

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It's good! I like it...it's interesting and sounds like it'll be funny! I can't wait for the next chapter. Maybe next time you could write more? :D

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so happy people are saying that they like it! I'm trying to write over 1500 words for the next chapter, maybe more and I'm almost done. Please keep reading.

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Scarlett

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So far I like it! I can't wait for more it seems like it is going to be very interesting! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks, I will update, but I'm trying to make the new chapter a little longer than the last. The validation line also frustrates me so if you want to see the second chapter as soon as it is updates go to fanfiction dot net and search 'The Bet'.

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