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Review #1, by KatsumaSuz Teardrops on my Guitar

15th April 2012:
I honestly have always liked th real ending to the seriees, but Ron/luna and Harry/Hermione havve always been aweaome too, and I really like this story.

Author's Response: Hey! Haha, I wrote this so long ago, I don't even know what I was thinking anymore. I do still quite like Ron/Luna and Harry/Hermione, however, since I wrote this story, I've actually become more inclined to the way canon worked out and so I do quite agree with you!

Considering the note I just added to the summary, I'm not the proudest of this one, but I am so glad that you liked it! I do secretly like it too, but I know it's not on par with a lot of other more well thought-out stoies.

Thank you so much for the review! It makes me really happy that my old writing is actually worthy of being read and liked! :D

from,
Liberty


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Review #2, by hpgrl Teardrops on my Guitar

9th March 2011:
Hi libby!
So, I liked the ships in this fic. they were original and generally well written. I found that the beginning of this story was a bit lacking in description. The ending had good description and really lead the reader to feel with luna, but the beginning was kind of more of you telling us what was happening instead of showing it through little details and descriptions.

I think you should've added a tiny bit of justification for the ships- so why were Hermione and Harry together? Why did Luna love Ron? I understand that its kind of a snapshot in time story and its a song-fic. so not much of that is usually included- but just a small sentence about the progress, status, or reason behind their relationship would've added more credibility to the story.

I would have to say great job overall! The writing flowed well, and although the characterization could have been deeper, the dialogue and the way you incorporated the song into the story was very well done. I love this song! so that's obviously a plus :)

-hope I wasn't too hard on you ^_^

Author's Response: Hey!

Urgh, you just had to pick one of my old(ish) fics! You also had to pick the second to the last part of my song-fic series that are all inter-connected.

The ships...well as I said, this is part of a series that I never bothered to turn into a short story collection. Harry and Hermione got together in a previous one-shot/song-fic. Luna's love for Ron...well I never justified that, I just did the whole snapshot in time thing, you're right though, I should've put in at least a sentence of why she loved him, but at the age I was at when I wrote this, I never thought about it.

Thank you so much for the review and the compliments! If I ever get around to editing this (like I always say I will) I will definitely include what you have found lacking in the new version.

You weren't too hard on me :) I'm much harder on myself, especially when it comes to the old stories I wrote like this.


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Review #3, by DaBluBanana Teardrops on my Guitar

5th November 2010:
Um...it's good. You can improve still, but it's good. I like it - the Luna/Ron thing was a bit unexpected, but it's a good story.

Author's Response: Yes, reading it over, I could've done a much better job with this. If I ever reach a point in my writing where I don't have much to do, I will go back and edit this and make it better. I'm finding that Luna is becoming a character I use a lot right now, and I didn't think it too unexpected, but thanks for your feedback on that. Before I do unlikely relationships in the future, I will make sure to at least insert a flashback of some sort that will explain the love between them (unrequited or otherwise.) But anyways, thanks for the review, and I'm glad you think it's a good story :)

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