Reading Reviews for My Little Dreamer
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by LadyL8 My Little Dreamer

8th July 2014:
Hi There.

I was reviewing for the House Cup when I saw your stunning banner and summary, and I knew I had to read your story. And I really liked it. I really liked the simplicity to it, but also how sweet and emotional it was.

Your description is really good. You create beautiful images, and make me see Victoire - with her beauty and good heart- in my head. And I love how Teddy describes her, because he sounds so in love - sounds like she is inhumanely beautiful and warm and, in his opinion, way too good for him.

I liked how you characterize Victoire. She's obviously a beautiful girl, but also warm, maybe a bit naive, caring, fair and definitely a dreamer. It almost sounds like she's inhuman - supernatural and/or goddess-like. And you can just tell how much he loves her.

Anyway. To sum up, I really loved it!

- Lotte

House Cup 2014 Review

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Review #2, by hpgrl My Little Dreamer

23rd March 2011:
hi! I really liked this one-shot. It was so simple, yet so full of emotion. You wrote Teddy's thoughts so beautifully and your writing here is very descriptive- I really like it :)

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Review #3, by spam_up_sam My Little Dreamer

9th February 2010:
This was really good, I enjoyed reading =]

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Review #4, by LindaSnape My Little Dreamer

9th February 2010:
I really enjoyed this.

It's rare that I see anyone write a story from Teddy's perspective, so kudos.

I particularly enjoyed the flow and pacing, it was seemingly flawless. I also enjoyed the fact that there were no words yet it was obvious to see how much he loved her and she loved him from simple gestures.

This was a beautiful piece! My only wish would be that it was longer. But none-the-less it is beautiful as is.

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