Reading Reviews for She Keeps on Growing
  
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Review #1, by ReAnna Slipping Through My Fingers All the Time

6th June 2010:
That was cute i loved it!

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Review #2, by blackhair Slipping Through My Fingers All the Time

9th April 2010:
Well it was beautiful and very nicely edited

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Review #3, by Pacific Wizard Slipping Through My Fingers All the Time

9th April 2010:
You captured the essence of Molly and her relationship with Ginny very well. Great memories and the story sounded sincere and heartfelt. You kept the story moving not dwelling too long on any section but you covered each snippet with just enough descriptive narrative. Well done. PW

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Review #4, by Kirsty Weasley Slipping Through My Fingers All the Time

8th April 2010:
Oh my god, tears much?! That song always sets me off!! I hate the idea of this whole growing up and leaving thing! Half of me wants it all the other half wants to go back. You did this really well, showing us how Mrs Weasley would have coped with it all, her one little girl. Well done, I loved it!- Kirsty x

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Review #5, by Akussa Slipping Through My Fingers All the Time

8th April 2010:
It's quite a nice piece you wrote there. I have to say I prefered the beginning; felt more emotionnaly involved, like you were Molly's heart. As the story goes on, feels more like it's her head talking, I don't know, maybe it's just me. But's it's still a good read. Just a little thing you might want to check / correct; it's not George that died, it's Fred.
Thank you for the emotional moment you gave me!

Author's Response: I know I made a typo with the twins! I've read that book scores of times too! lol I just re-submitted it with Fred instead of George. And I can see what you mean, in the beginning I'm setting it up more and the stories are longer and more detailed, then they get shorter. See I kind of wanted it to be that way so it was like her reminiscing and then flashes of memories, kind of sweeping her away. A life flashing before the eyes bit, but maybe I'll go back and expand on some of them. Thank you!

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Review #6, by Aurorofthelight Slipping Through My Fingers All the Time

8th April 2010:
Splendid! Absolutely Splendid! What a heartwarming tale you have crafted here! Love the Molly mother's heart angle. Great Job! :)

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Review #7, by LindaSnape Slipping Through My Fingers All the Time

8th April 2010:
Aw, this was so sweet! I was unsure of whether or not I would like this and I'm pleased to say that I enjoyed this. I got teary around the end, that was such a beautiful way to end it.

However, I would like to point out that it was Fred that was killed not George. I will forgive you, it's an easy enough mistake to make. I just thought I'd let you know. ^_^ Other than that, I didn't find any grammatical or spelling errors that were glaringly obvious, so kudos!

I love how you fit the song into this piece. It really seemed to fit and I really do think that Molly would miss her little girl whilst she was at school.

I've never really liked Ginny, but in this piece you portrayed her as a human and not 'GinnySue' so I could see why Molly would have a fondness for her. I also liked that you had her drawing because that might have given her something to talk to Dean about, especially if she were a good artist.

I love Molly here. She is trying so hard to be strong, but she doesn't want her little girl to be gone.

I also like that you didn't reflect too long on the battle at Hogwarts. At first it annoyed me, but then I thought it was fitting because you were talking about how Molly felt about Ginny and not focusing on how heartbroken she was when Fred died.

This was very, very nice! Good job! It was a nice change of pace from some of the pieces on here.

Author's Response: Thank you for such a carefully constructed review! It's really helpful, and ugh yes I caught the twin typo when it was already in the queue, so I just edited it and resubmitted it, thank you for pointing it out. I'm glad you liked my characterization of Ginny and Molly, that makes me happy I worked really hard on it. Hahaha I hate GinnySues too ;). Thanks again!

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