Reading Reviews for One Kiss Under the Mistletoe
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Review #1, by UncleSteve32 One Kiss Under the Mistletoe

5th January 2016:
Not a big fan of one-shots but all in all yeah it pretty well explains Lily.

Author's Response: I'm not a huge fan of one-shots either, but I thought I'd give it a try :)


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Review #2, by girly1393 One Kiss Under the Mistletoe

6th March 2011:
"Basically, you can't escape."

Funny and sweet.

Bravo to you.

Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you liked it:)

Thanks for the review! x

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Review #3, by Riya Potter One Kiss Under the Mistletoe

24th May 2010:
It was a good story! Keep writing. Well, I know how reviews r imp. as I don't get much so I keep on reviewing. If u hv time, go thru my stories and review, please!!! I don't write romantic stories as I can't write as nice as u but I like mysterious ones. So, best of luck:)

Author's Response: Aww thankyou so much! You're so kind :D
I'm quite busy right now with exams in two weeks!!! :(
But I'll update as soon as possible, I promise!

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Review #4, by MsAnnaPotter One Kiss Under the Mistletoe

3rd May 2010:
a) this is such a cute idea! b)i find the idea of a school encouraging kissing kind of far-fetched...which makes it even more fun! and c)up in the top paragraph? i think you were looking for h-e-e-l, not h-e-l-l...don't you hate it when you spell something right, just the wrong way, and spell check doesn't catch it for you? anyway, adorable story, i love how it's so short and sweet!

Author's Response: Awww, thankyou, you're so sweet :)
Yeah, I hate it when the spell check is like that. Thanks for letting me know, I'll check it out.
:) xx

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Review #5, by RissaRaeRae One Kiss Under the Mistletoe

28th January 2010:
That was cute. It was sweet and very like typical LEJP in a goodd way! : )

Author's Response: awww, thankyou very much (:
im glad you liked the story (:

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Review #6, by kiley One Kiss Under the Mistletoe

28th January 2010:
I highly doubt dumbledore would place enchanted mistletoe all over the castle

Author's Response: true, but it is fiction...
thanks for the review anyways (:

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Review #7, by emeraldeyes77 One Kiss Under the Mistletoe

27th January 2010:
I think it's really good just I would add a little more to it. Like I would describe the kiss more as well as everything that Lily was thinking and feeling during the kiss and when she finally said yes to James. Then maybe go back and starting with James coming out of the portrait hole write in James's point of view. But other those little ideas I think it's very cute =)

Author's Response: thankyou for your kind review (:
i may edit the story later and add to it but for now ill leave it.
thanks again (:

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