"Basically, you can't escape."
Funny and sweet.
Bravo to you.Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you liked it:)
Thanks for the review! x Report Review
It was a good story! Keep writing. Well, I know how reviews r imp. as I don't get much so I keep on reviewing. If u hv time, go thru my stories and review, please!!! I don't write romantic stories as I can't write as nice as u but I like mysterious ones. So, best of luck:)Author's Response: Aww thankyou so much! You're so kind :D
I'm quite busy right now with exams in two weeks!!! :(
But I'll update as soon as possible, I promise! Report Review
a) this is such a cute idea! b)i find the idea of a school encouraging kissing kind of far-fetched...which makes it even more fun! and c)up in the top paragraph? i think you were looking for h-e-e-l, not h-e-l-l...don't you hate it when you spell something right, just the wrong way, and spell check doesn't catch it for you? anyway, adorable story, i love how it's so short and sweet!Author's Response: Awww, thankyou, you're so sweet :)
Yeah, I hate it when the spell check is like that. Thanks for letting me know, I'll check it out.
:) xx Report Review
That was cute. It was sweet and very like typical LEJP in a goodd way! : )Author's Response: awww, thankyou very much (:
im glad you liked the story (: Report Review
I highly doubt dumbledore would place enchanted mistletoe all over the castleAuthor's Response: true, but it is fiction...
thanks for the review anyways (: Report Review
I think it's really good just I would add a little more to it. Like I would describe the kiss more as well as everything that Lily was thinking and feeling during the kiss and when she finally said yes to James. Then maybe go back and starting with James coming out of the portrait hole write in James's point of view. But other those little ideas I think it's very cute =)Author's Response: thankyou for your kind review (:
i may edit the story later and add to it but for now ill leave it.
thanks again (: Report Review
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