I like it thought whats with her middle name being the same as Voldemorts Mother? Idk Anyways good story Update soon 10/10 AlaynaAuthor's Response: thanks for the feedback. sorry, didn't know it was the same. oh well. it could have significance later on now that i know. thanks again. next chapter will be up soon. Report Review
Really great start. Your grammar and spelling is great, and your character flow is amazing. Really, keep it up! :DAuthor's Response: thank you thank you ;] chapter two will be up real soon. :D Report Review
I really like the begining and I hope that you would keep on going even with the lack of reviewing. Update Soo Happy Writing, Alayna 10/10Author's Response: thank you :] my other story, far from heaven, has a chapter in validation right now so i have to wait. i already have the next four chapters written for this story. i was just going to wait for a bigger response *shrug* but i'll update soon. ;] Report Review
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