Awesome!!! Super great! I love Snape's POV, always, and this one was really of my kind. Thanks for offering such a sentimental story.
Keep writing... :) Report Review
I really enjoyed this it was really wonderful and well written. So great!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
My only complaint is that this is far too short a chapter, in my mind.
But I do love that you've written a piece from Severus' point of view and have done some digging around in his head. I appreciate when people can do that aptly and very Canonly as I think you've managed.
I just think that Sev may be a tad bit more descriptive, but that's just me. However, I like this.
Nice job!Author's Response: Thanks!
I toyed with longer, but feared that it might detract from the quality. Report Review
Well done, thrilling, dark and sad. But why Spiel? What does that mean?Author's Response: Thank you!
'Spiel' is the spoken tale, a 'spell', best read aloud.
this is a lovely story its wonderfulAuthor's Response: Thank you for your review. Report Review
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