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Review #1, by Colonel NeBleu Bottle Understanding

7th February 2010:
Wow, though this site has great grammar and spelling, finding a story that I find fun to read is extremely difficult. Good work, this story has enough content for my attention span.

No romance(which I grow tired of reading), no popular pairing, and is realistic. The only flaw I find is that this story is too fast and has little dialogue. This story is still pretty good, though.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the story. I agree with your critique that it's a little fast. As for the dialogue, that was actually intentional, as I was going for the idea that they didn't speak to each other much. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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