BAHAHAH!!! so funny! great story, very hysterical i thought it was! (if u couldn't tell..) just wondering, was this set in harry's third year then? cause i was a little confused. i'm guessing that harry doesn't know who his godfather is, but i could be totally wrong!
either way, good story, i loved it!Author's Response: You're right, this was meant to be around the Prizoner of Azkaban era, with some flashbacks here and there. Thanks so much for reading (: Report Review
LoL...I was laughing so hard I was literally hyperventilating. Good work! I love the Marauders. Anywayz, there's only one flaw to your story there and it's that Remus and Sirius could have easily apparated out of there...
It was very nicely told and the ending was good. So, uhm 8/10...?
Keep it up!
SeverusLoveAuthor's Response: Hahaha, good point! I actually didn't think of that...
Thanks for reading! (: Report Review
this was so cute, I loved Remus and Sirius in this. And noone believing that Sirius could cook. I also loved how James proposed to her just like that and Lily slapped him. Such a James and Lily thing.
And the bit at the end with Ron was hilarious!
I loved this so much! I am adding it to my favourites. :-D
10/10Author's Response: Thank you so much! (: Report Review
lol. i absolutely loved it...esp. the twist at the end...
one tiny little thing though, sirius acts really immature for a person whos left hogwarts, but apart from that, its awesome.. :)Author's Response: Lol thank youu. I've always pictured Sirius as a little on the immature side *giggles* I think Lupin kinda balances him out. Thanks for reading! Report Review
lmfao perfect. at first i didn't like it, and thought you were gonna mess it up, but you made it awesome at the endAuthor's Response: lol thanks Jack.. xD Report Review
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