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Review #1, by JeanSyrotS This is an Example of:

24th February 2010:
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"dull as mud" , "five feet short" and "height steroids" ?

I've seen people try to use wordplay, and just make themselves sound corny.

But I must say: Brilliant.

Absolutely Brilliant!

Phrases like these shot out, and gave me a giggle. It was a nice play on words.

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Omy Goodness, Val, this story is amazing!...
perfect attention grabber & Awsome title...

I think you did very well introducing Ivy, her character was very red lined, very personalized.

So far it sounds like a great storyline, you've already got a few potential plots set, and the reader is wondering: so will she stay with Jasper? or will it be a Remus/Ivy or a Sirius/Ivy...
plus she's a werewolf!

I think you also did very well in introducing each character as they came, maybe just the way they spoke (James and his sing-song voice) or a small action, (Remus and his head nod), Sirius with his cocky grin, and even Peter didn't at all seem to be the cleche'd odd-man-out. I like that you said the 'THREE most eligable'

Also, just in the way you started the story, it wasn't over done, but it had so much.essence, so much flavor and pizaz, and yet completely believable...

yes yes yes, so please update!

Author's Response: Haha your review was positively spiffy. Thanks so much for your insight, and I very much appreciate you not giving up on me yet. :P

BIG mungo Huggles!
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Review #2, by anonymous This is an Example of:

18th January 2010:
awesome start! can't wait for the next chapter :D

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope to update within the week.

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Review #3, by Malfoy by heart This is an Example of:

15th January 2010:
Interesting truly fascinating, I really really hope Jasper does not break her heart when she tells him. But then I am guessing the story would be different, hmmm interesting cannot wait for more

Author's Response: Aww, thank you very much. That is very sweet to say.

Yes, the story would be different, wouldn't it. ^_^ -No plot spoilers, but very nice perception.

Huggles,
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Review #4, by Rebecca This is an Example of:

14th January 2010:
I like it. I can't wait to read more. update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks, love. I shall update soon!

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