I adored it, and I loved how you portrayed James as the guy who didn't want to be the Harry Potter's son, but instead strived against everything and essentially strive against himself.
But then Addie came! And it was beautiful how it all worked out so - flowishly :P
I'll favourite it when I log on

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I'm crying, you know that right?
Happy tears :)

Author's Response: Woot! *fist pump for soliciting tears*

Im sorry you're crying, but I cant help but to find that comment flattering lol. Thanks! *hugs*

~~Chelsea

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I really liked this. I think you blended all three challenges together perfectly. I think you wrote James really well, how he didn't want to hurt Adonia, so he tried to do what was best for her. I think this flowed really nicely. The end was really romantic, too. I always love a happy ending.

Your description was well done and the song really fit with song.


ps. Thankyou for writing the challenge!

Author's Response: Aww thank you! I am really glad you liked it, and Im really glad you thought I made them go well together! It was a fabulous callenge, I had so much fun participating in it! Thanks again!
~~Chelsea

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I really love what you've done with this-- with my challenge. It's a brilliant twist that he does let go at first, instead of them both just being very happy and never letting go.

And it's also very poetic. I like that.

Hmmn.

xE

Author's Response: Hey! (that was quick xD) Thanks I am glad you liked what I did with it! I ddont think James would have just been all mushy lovey so thats the reason I made him a teensy bit of a git :]
~~Chelsea

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great story this one. i liked it very much.^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Thank you! I am very glad that you enjoyed it!
~~Chelsea

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