This story is a bit wierd so i think you should work on writing because it didn't make much sense.
~yoyo~ Report Review
I won't lie, it's pretty simple. It's a chance meeting, a coincidence, but it's a good premise.
You and grammar are fighting an epic battle, and you are losing big time.
And a spell check wouldn't go amiss either.
But still, it's not bad.
xEAuthor's Response: Grammer and I don't like eachother. I'm trying really hard but there's a reason they won't let me into Honors English. As for my spelling, I thought I did really well this time. I'll go back and check. And I know it's simple, I was tinkering with and idea and it didn't turn out exactly like I wanted but that's probably the best I could get. Thanks for the critique. Report Review
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