Reading Reviews for First Snow
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Review #1, by FredWeasleyIsMyKing First Snow

19th March 2015:

Here for gryffindor in the review competition!

Oh my goodness, this is genuinely one of the cutest moments I've ever read of these two. Just a simple moment and James is so so sweet and I can't even deal. Gah. The feels!! I loved now lily was so warm and comfy in bed so didn't want to move (that would totally be me) so James just picked her up and took her out so she didn't miss anything. It' was genuinely so cute. Your descriptions of the snow were lovely, I imagined the whole thing. And you could practically feel their love for each other you wrote it so well!!

I'm so happy I stumbled upon this, it's made me really happy to read as it's so cute and well written!

Great job,

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Review #2, by raznilla First Snow

25th March 2011:
This is really awesome C: so cute! Really good imagery!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! :)

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Review #3, by hh First Snow

1st November 2010:
its so sweet! can you believe they're dead? i always feel like they're real. By the way, you're one of the only good writers on this site, and keep it up!

Author's Response: oh my goodness, thank you!! what high praise! Thanks sooo much for reviewing! :)

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Review #4, by Just_A_Lily First Snow

13th April 2010:
Thats so sweet! I love the whole furst snow thing- its my favortie time of the whole year. I really like your one shot though! I like how sleepy Lily sounds, its adorable! 10/10!

Author's Response: OH MY GOODNESS!!! Thanks so much!! I didn't think you'd actually read my stuff, cuz I really like yours so... yeah, that's exciting!!! :D
thank you!

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Review #5, by spam_up_sam First Snow

11th January 2010:
Twas lovely =]

Author's Response: AHHH!! Thank you so much for reviewing! :) :) :)
I'm glad you liked it!!!
Oh my goodness you have no idea how happy I am that someone actually reviewed my story! Yay!

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