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Review #1, by perfectrain

3rd January 2011:

I really really like it.
I know that it is a little bit presumptuous of me to assume you aren't eleven, but assuming you aren't eleven you write very well from a younger persons point of view. It's very believable. And you are setting up your story very well.
Add another chapter soon please! I'm dying to know more about Molly.

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Review #2, by RoseParsons

letters about home

28th February 2010:

HI:)its a fabulous start to the story:) it has lodes of potential.
:)
Anyway
Keep it up because I will be waiting with bated breath for your
Next up date :) Insanely jealous over here;) hahahha
10/10 & of course added to my favourites
Rose
xx

Author's Response: im so sorry the next chapter is almost wrote but i cant remeber where i saved it.
Dont worry its prbally saved on my pen drive but i have to check through eveything so it should be up in the next few days!!!

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Review #3, by Dreaming of Remus

letters about home

15th January 2010:

So far I like it. You did slip back into third person around the mention of the bunny in the hat. I have the same problem. Mostly write in 3 so I have to be careful when I switch to 1.

Author's Response: yay! Thank you so much for the review (you are my first one ever)
I will try to keep that in mind from now one and get someone else to read through it.
Thx for the review

kat

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