AMAZING! I absolutely LOVE all of the descriptions and the way you kept Sirius' way of acting, but still made the proposal super-romantic.
Since I'm going to marry Sirius (lol Cx) I hope this is how he's going to propose! :'D
Everything about this was just super-fantastic and I love it. Love it, love it, love it, love it, LOVE IT!
AMAZING WRITING!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I want an invite to your's and Sirius' wedding (; Report Review
Kriss, you are so not fair! How is anyone supposed to compete with a gorgeous story/outtake like this?? Seriously, I absoluely adore it. The imagery and the descriptions are so vivid and really provide a perfect picture of the scenery. And of course your characterizations are great. I love how you made Sirius both goofy and romantic at the same time. Oh and I love the way Rory accepted: fist pump! Lol. Amazing work, Kriss! 10/10.
JazzAuthor's Response: aww shucks. i'm glad you like it jazz :] when the sequel to my story family comes up (if i ever get around to it ;]) then you'll have to read it, it has rory & sirius in the beginning of their romance...kinda, you'll understand when you read it. hahah & fist pump for the win! Report Review
I luved your story!!!
It was soo adorable and fluffy it made me squeal by the end.Author's Response: Aww, thank you :D i'm really glad you loved it! Report Review
Just finished Family myself. Loved it and love this even more. Nicely done.Author's Response: Ahh, thanks. I'm glad you loved it! Report Review
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