{reviewid: 2727592, reviewer: 'Lauren'}
| Review #1, by Lauren | Sick |
4th August 2012:
Please continue the story! Its really good!
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{reviewid: 2722363, reviewer: 'Anon'}
19th July 2012:
Please tell me this story hasn't been abandoned! I just finished reading and I want to know what happens next! Do you plan on continuing this story? I hope so! I love it!
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{reviewid: 2661827, reviewer: 'A%20fan'}
19th February 2012:
So, I hope you will continue this story. I like how you write Sirius, a little more serious than most, but more like I picture him. Please update!
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{reviewid: 2622112, reviewer: 'dancingsnow02'}
28th November 2011:
I really like your story! It is something different from a lot of what I have read before, and I like it. However, I really want to know what happeneds next so Update please!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I will
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{reviewid: 2618759, reviewer: 'Kathrynen'}
21st November 2011:
next chapter please!
Author's Response: soonish :(
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{reviewid: 2618578, reviewer: 'Cat'}
21st November 2011:
Please write more soon! I want to know what happens!
I really like your style of writing
Author's Response: Thank you, I'll get more up...soonish
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{reviewid: 2604219, reviewer: 'Jenni%20Summers'}
18th October 2011:
No! I need more! I need to know that Lily is ok! PLease please please write more of your amazing story? PLease and thanks :D xx
Author's Response: Thank you, and I will, I've got writer's block now, but I'll finish this story soon
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{reviewid: 2589970, reviewer: 'LilyGinnyBella'}
15th September 2011:
Alices maiden name was Prewwet thatnks for a good story
Author's Response: thank you, I'll have to go back and change it when i have time, thanks for reviewing :D
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{reviewid: 2576483, reviewer: 'Owlpost68'}
23rd August 2011:
I do love the excitement and everything, and I get it was supposed to be a cliff hanger, but it seemed unfinished. That was a crazy dream she had though, pretty freaky, you did really well doing that. I feel like they at least should have gotten Dumbledore and to St Mungos or something though, but it is a bit more cliff hanger like this way. I can't wait to see what happens next, I'm glad you'll be working on this one more :)
Author's Response: thank you, you are right this is a bit unfinished, i wish it wasn't, but i just wanted it out of the way because of the several writers block I had writing it, thank you for your comment and advice :D
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{reviewid: 2575379, reviewer: 'mef_hplvr'}
21st August 2011:
What?! You can't end a chapter like that!! Ahh! Update soon! Like ASAP!!!
Author's Response: I will, don't worry
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{reviewid: 2575171, reviewer: 'lolapasse'}
21st August 2011:
Okay... she wants to have sex with james AFTER the marriage. Now that's cheesy. Ugh.
Author's Response: sorry, I am cheesy and old fashioned, that's just how I was raised, I think its a romantic concept
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{reviewid: 2564449, reviewer: 'Prongs4Evans'}
| Review #12, by Prongs4Evans | Letters |
8th August 2011:
Are you planning on updating soon? Please do. I don't mean to sound rude I just really want to see where this story is gonna go. I love it :)
Author's Response: ...yes...I will update...soonish, but i'm currently suffering writers block
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{reviewid: 2524804, reviewer: 'mef_hplvr'}
22nd May 2011:
That's an interesting twist with the letters I mean. Anyway great chapter! Update soon please!
Author's Response: thank you, I'm about half way through writing the next chapter, so it should be up soonish
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{reviewid: 2523021, reviewer: 'Owlpost68'}
18th May 2011:
Wow, even though it was short, I thought it was really interesting. I never thought about that before, I mean obviously he tried to recruit people, but never really thought about how. He can't really go door to door.
I think it was a great chapter :)
Author's Response: thanks :D I'm glad you liked it
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{reviewid: 2522943, reviewer: 'i%20love%20this%20again'}
18th May 2011:
i love how you really grabbed the reader
Author's Response: Thanks thank means a lots :D
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{reviewid: 2522938, reviewer: 'in%20love%20with%20this'}
18th May 2011:
i like it with the whole lily scared thing and the lily really being shelled
Author's Response: thank you very very much :D
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{reviewid: 2519531, reviewer: 'Been'}
10th May 2011:
Nice chapter! Not the most exciting but it's sweet :) though props for being like the only story in three others to update in over 2-3 weeks lol
Author's Response: thank you :D :D
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{reviewid: 2518364, reviewer: 'ekroman'}
7th May 2011:
I really like your story :) Please update soon!
Author's Response: thank you, I'll update as soon as i can
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{reviewid: 2518174, reviewer: 'mef_hplvr'}
6th May 2011:
Cute chapter :) They act like brother and sister haha! Great Chapter!! Update soon please!!
Author's Response: thank you, I kinda wanted a brother and sister thing so I'm glad it came across. I'm working on the next chapter, don't worry
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{reviewid: 2502077, reviewer: 'mef_hplvr'}
2nd April 2011:
Poor Lily. Anyway. Update soon! Great Chapter!!
Author's Response: thanks XD I'll update asap, but it will get harder now because I'm studying for my ACTS
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{reviewid: 2501362, reviewer: 'Ina'}
30th March 2011:
Love it like so so much
DONT DARE EVER NOT CONTINUE THIS PLEASE :(
i would die okay do update update update!
Much love xx
Author's Response: :D It's going to be continued, don't worry :) I'm glad you like it
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{reviewid: 2498816, reviewer: 'mef_hplvr'}
25th March 2011:
So sweet. :) Please update soon!! Great Chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks I'll update soon, promise
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{reviewid: 2498794, reviewer: 'ViolaBlack'}
| Review #23, by ViolaBlack | Fears |
25th March 2011:
write more please!It's realy good, like super.
Author's Response: thank you very much, I more is coming
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{reviewid: 2498501, reviewer: 'EmmA'}
| Review #24, by EmmA | Fears |
24th March 2011:
Please write more it is really good. Nice chapter names by the way. I love this story please write more!! PLEASE!
Author's Response: thank you very much, more chapters coming
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{reviewid: 2498440, reviewer: 'lilygirl_1014'}
24th March 2011:
Mushy... but still good... 10/10.
Author's Response: thanks, i like mushy every now and then
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