That was hot. 9/10 : ) Report Review
Love love love it! I wish I'd known you had this. LolAuthor's Response: Thank you for reading, Judi! :D I'm glad you liked it... ^__^ Report Review
hello deary LadyMalfoy23 from the forum with your review!! :)
Between me and you Ginny/Hermione ships are one of my favorite!! :) lol
This was written really well and seemed to flow easily. Your characters seemed spot on, especially with the hermione and the german language part, although the smiling vowels may have been to air headed for ginny! ;) lol but it was funny.
One thing i do think my add more to your story however would probably be more details, and more feelings. Since you are telling it from hermiones point of view you could add a few more thoughts on what the flat looks like, or more in depth of her awkwardness of it all at first! Other then that this seems like a great one shot!! :DAuthor's Response: Hello! :)
Now that's the kind of review I have been hoping for to receive, someone who'd actually tell me what could be done better or what's missing. Because I didn't know. :/ Thanks for doing that. :) I'll definitely re-write and do the revision later on.
That vowel part and Ginny's "air-headed" remark was just actually something to cheer up Hermione. But I think that didn't come across very well. :s hehe
Thank you so much for the very helpful review, hun! :) I mean it. Report Review
That was hot, haha ;)Author's Response: LOL Thanks for reading. :) Report Review
Another brilliantly written story. :)Author's Response: :D This is the prequel to Unfaithful. Feel free to check it out. :) And thank you! :) Report Review
i think you should continue this, or make aother story, a sequel!!!Author's Response: Thanks Lexi. I'm working on another one-shot, another prequel to Unfaithful, but a sequel to Love-bite. Hope you check it out too. Thanks for leaving a comment. :) Report Review
please please RnR mine that would so nice of you!
CandyFLOSSAuthor's Response: Sure, will do. :) Report Review
interesting story this one.^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Thanks, hun. :) Report Review
well done, great story! Keep up the good work =)Author's Response: Thanks, Hanna. :) Report Review
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