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Review #1, by Harry and Ginny A Night Time Stroll With J.P.

13th January 2010:
i think James definitely fancies Spencer and the walk to the Room of Requirement proved that but also i think Spencer is starting to like James due to the moment when she brushed the snow off of his hair. will u update soon please?^_^


Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: I'm going to try but it might not be for a while I have to write a couple diploma exams

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Review #2, by Harry and Ginny Relocation

27th December 2009:
great start 4 the 1st chapter. it seems to me that this Spencer will be very interesting so i had to read this chapter! by the way i found some mistakes.
1. Mrs. Clark - Miss Clark (u only use Mrs. 4 people who are married)
2. worth talking too - worth talking to
3. I could barley breath - I could barely breath
4. flu powder - floo powder
5. I will find tour transcript - I will find your transcript
6. you donít see many of those around her - you donít see many of those around here
7. your momís a teacher hear - your momís a teacher here
8. if your moms always hovering - if your mom's always hovering
9. Bridgett and Brittany, there identical twins - Bridgett and Brittany, they're identical twins
10. Oh your right - Oh you're right
11. Roses little brother - Rose's little brother

i hope i could help u. James is definitely interested in her but i bet she's not going to be interested in him 4 a while. they will be interesting to read. will u update soon please?^_^


Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Thank you I appreciate your help and I will get the rest of it up as soon as I can.

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