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Review #1, by WhenTuesdayComes

Alba's Excuses

17th December 2010:

Ahh poor Alba and her defect boyfriends, love Harmony's charactor btw!

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Review #2, by WhenTuesdayComes

Harm's Way

17th December 2010:

The beginning needs a bit of work, theres a few misspellings and what not. Once you hit maumoon though theres lots of nifty jokes scattered about. And as for who Harmony (ceres) hit...hmm toughy all the guys you named are still alive in the books, unless you went off the charts :)

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Review #3, by nelliface

Alba's Excuses

2nd May 2010:

looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: One will be up as soon as I finish a few essays :)

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Review #4, by Jaymexoxo

Alba's Excuses

16th January 2010:

very interesting, little rabbit... looking forward to the next chapter :)

Author's Response: thanks, I'm glad people are enjoying it. I'm a slow typer but the next chapter will be up soon :L

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Review #5, by Moon Woman

Alba's Excuses

12th January 2010:

OoooOoooOoo Cliff hanger!

I liked this but it's a little bit confusing about whats going on in this bit...

**"Hey, I've got to drive my little sister to school," she rolled her eyes and hoisted a large slingbag over her shoulder. She walked out the door. The bell tinkled.**

I just don't know where it came from and it seems to have change tense, from 1st to 3rd person, sorry if it's just me being a complete idiot but it just cut up the flow of the chapter for me.

Anyway I am intrigued so update soon.

Author's Response: I'll rephrase it right away, thanks for you suggestion and I'll update soon :)

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