Loved this chapter seeing things from all of their pov was
really intreasting and I loved it.. I have a funny feeling
Danny will cause some problems between Draco and
hermiones relationship.. Fingers crossed lets hope not..
Can't wait for the next chapter 10/10 X

Author's Response: So happy you liked the different POVs .:) I really loved diving into the minds of everyone.
Ah, Danny boy, he's going to have big things ahead. Thats all I'll say for now. ;)
Thank you for reviewing, I'm working on the next chapter now.

~Luna

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I love ur book so far please update soon.

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it. I'll get the next chapter out as soon as I can. :)

~Luna

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That game was great! And I thought It was Hermione who got shot xD. I gotta say I actually read that in Evana's voice =P But there's one thing... Are you realy getting me into Dramione, Luna? Really??? x_x hahaha =P Keep up the good work, girl =)

Author's Response: Thats was I was going for, you think that, then it's Ginny instead. Oh really, thats wonderful! I try to do my very best when writing Luna, mak her sound as Luna-y as possible. :) Lol, That is my deep down goal, to turn all non Dramione lovers into, Dramione lovers like myself!! I shall consider you a convert haha. ;D

~Luna

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I LOVED THE SYORY it was so awsome

Author's Response: Thanks! More is coming soon.

~Luna

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i really liked this chapter with all the different view points :) i have to say my favorite was Draco's :P Can't wait for you to update :D

Author's Response: Draco is my soft spot as well. We all love the bad boy. :) Glad you liked the different POV, they were so much fun to write.

~Luna

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i love this story so much! please update quickly, can't wait for the next chapter to come up :)

Author's Response: I'm having a bit of a writers block, but I'm working through it. I'll get the next chapter up as soon as I can. So happy you're enjoying it!

~Luna

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Amazing chapter!!! Although why are all the players in the gryffindor quidditch team in the last year?

Author's Response: Huh, you know I never thought about it before. It just happened. Gald you liked it!

~Luna

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Absoultley loved ginny and luna fighting made me LOL

Author's Response: Me too, I had a blast writing it. :)

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What I loved most about this chapter:
1. I could never write such a detailed Quidditch game! I tried in my second chapter and was like "Uh, I can't!" But this is a really detailed game! Almost like reading a re-play of a real sports game.
2. I love Ginny, she's so, well, Ginny-ish!
3. McGonagall: she's so well-written!
4. And most of all, the Dramione encounter! It's the sort of thing I'd always wished for in the books; I think Malfoy really would be attracted to Hermione because of her spunk. On to the next chapter!

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Aw, this chapter was really sweet! :D
I liked how you wrote the "looking for a flat" part: the description of the flat, their conversations and I also found Hermione and her mum's conversation to be quite funny.

I definitely didn't expect to see Lucius this soon! Oh God, he's just awfully annoying, rude and extremely... Extremely stupid!!

The ending of this chapter was the cutest thing ever! Absolutely loved it! :D
Can't wait to read the next one, especially after all the brain-storming we did for it, hahaha! xD

Love,
Catairly

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really good. i enjoyed it as much as the first chapter.

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really good. quidditch is hard to write about, trying to keep up w/ the game, but you did a really good job.

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love it update soon please

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As promised, here I am!
I'm loving the whole fic so far: the plot, the descriptions, everything! During this four chapters some parts made me open a wide smile, others made me laugh hysterically, and others made me get all emotional (like the fourth chapter)!

Now, about this chapter: I loved how you wrote the whole graduation, described their feelings so well and put an amazing atmosphere surronding the story. In all honesty, this was how I wanted to books to have ended, not in a huge years jump with all our favourite characters grown up and having kids...
Well, I can't wait to read the next chapter and keep up the good work Luna!!

Love,
Catairly

Author's Response: Hello! So sorry for the late respond. Life kept getting in the way. *sigh*
I'm SO happy you enjoyed my story so much! I do try and bring all different emotions into the chapters. Yes chapter four was a favorite of mine too. I loved writing the speaches. :)

My thoughts exactly. I like how the books end, but I always wanted more...to know what happened right after DH during the next few years. I'm working on the next chapter right now, just having some writers block getting in my way, but I'll beat it!

Thanks for the wonderful review! =)

~Luna

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Yay Gryffindor wins :DD

Author's Response: Could it really be any other way? ;D Thanks for reading.

~Luna

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There were a couple of spelling mistakes such as the word "straight" and when you are calling out the names, use their last names because suddenly hearing "Hermione" sounds odd.

Author's Response: I'm in the middle of going through and editing all the chapters, so thank you for pointing that out. :) And for reading.

~Luna

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You know what. I prefer your story to the original ending of the book. The atmosphere of graduation, the unity of houses, those are the things that would touch people the most. I'm so disappointed with the original one because the story just 'jumped' to so several years ahead with everyone having kids. I mean, c'mon, graduation is a much better ending than having kids. Geez...
But back to your story, it is a nice one. Love the unity of the houses and the display of emotions during their 7th year. Great job ^^

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Man, u r like a writing godess! LOL I thought the bludger had hit Harry as he always gets in trouble one way or the other! But still OMG! Please leave me some tips so I can write like you!!!

Author's Response: Oh wow thank you so much for saying that! :) Yes Harry does seem to be the one always landing himself in trouble lol. I'm speechless that you'd want writing tips from me, but I'll give it go.
First off I'd say find what you love most about HP, pairings, characters etc. Then just starting thinking about your characters, what do you thinks they'd do, feel, act. The best way to start is to sit down and type whatever comes into your head, thats how this one got its beginning lol. Other than that just go where your story leads you, they tend to take on a life of there own, and don't be affraid to try new things. I hope I was able to be of some help, and if you'd like to talk to me more I'm on The Leaky Cauldron dot org under the name LunaLuver, same as here. I hope you hear from you again! :)

~Luna

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1) I love it.
2)Yes.
3)Yes.

I have to say, my favorite part was definitely when Luna said, "I think house unity is a lovely thing." I was laughing so hard, I almost cried! :)

~DracoObsession17~

Author's Response: Aw thanks I'm so happy you liked it. :) Thats one of my favorite lines too, Luna is such fun to write. She's my favorite next to Draco, because getting in her head is a ball.

~Luna

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Oh. My. God. THAT WAS SO COOL!!! I was literally on the edge of my seat reading that! Luna and Ginny's fight was hilarious! Great Job! :)

~DracoObsession17~

Author's Response: Thank you, it was a bit different for them to be fighting but I think it really fit the both of them so well. Ginny does have the Weasley temper after all. I'm gald you enjoyed it. :)

~Luna

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Wow! That is so awesome! I always did enjoy reading the Quidditch scenes in the books. :) I've just started a fanfic, too. Isn't it fun? :)

~DracoObsession17~

Author's Response: Quidditchis one of my very favorite things to read about in the books so when I started writting this it just had to be about Quidditch. Oh thats wonderful. I'll give it a read and leave you a nice review. :)

~Luna

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Loved it. Bloody brilliant :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :9

~Luna

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good start for your first story. i admire those who can write because even though i try, i suck

Author's Response: Thank you. I remember feeling the same way, I thought no one would like anything I wrote and now here I am! If you'd really like to write something give it a try, you never know how great it could be. :)

~Luna

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I hated the fact that Hermione and Draco go out, I seriously hate that but I pretty much like everything else. Why couldn't it be Draco and Lavender? I mean then Lavender can shut the hell up.

Author's Response: I'm really sorry to hear that you hate Draco and Hermione being together, but this is a Dramione after all. I'm glad you're liking everything else though.

~Luna

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What NO! I don't Draco and Hermione to be together I want Ron and Hermione to get married. Now I just hate Draco Malfoy even more.

Author's Response: Now who can really hate Draco Malfoy? Well ok, maybe just a little. Sorry but there's no Ron and Hermione in this story, if you'd like some of them I have them paired together in my other story, Typically Me.

~Luna

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