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Review #1, by SilverLining_491 Chapter 2

12th November 2010:
Hey I love your story so far :) your characterisations of helga and godric are exactly how i would imagine them. I can't wait to see how you portray Rowena and Salazar. Your writing style is really good :D My one and only critisim is that it seems a little too fast paced but other than that great chapter :) x

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Review #2, by RoseMMBlack The Escape

10th January 2010:
nice, very nice. I like the whole servent thing but you might want to add in more of helga's thoughts and feeling - her dismay at only being a servent and his life no worth anytihng or her anger at it.

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