Reading Reviews for Truth or Dare
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Review #1, by American Ginny Truth or Dare

2nd April 2017:
It's a cute fix but it's very, very rushed. It's more of a play-by-play of an event than an actual story. Spend some time flushing it out and expanded it. Have a conflict like Harry dating Ginny and hermione dating him to kiss the prettiest girl he thinks that is in the room. Just give it more depth and time to occur. It's a good idea but it needs work on becoming more of a story and having you attach to a character. It's also unnecessary to state whose point of view it is if you aren't going to switch persons.

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Review #2, by hermione999 Truth or Dare

19th March 2010:
Lol wow, I like your story.
Check mine out. "A Lovers Story" :D

Author's Response: i will definently check ur story out and thank you :)

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Review #3, by auror_snape Truth or Dare

7th January 2010:
How did Ginny get close to Snape to make out with him and live? And I thought adult/minor things were forbidden on this site.

But it was still hilarious! 9/10

Author's Response: haha idk. The adult minor thing is forbidden they r making me revise the story

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Review #4, by jay Truth or Dare

30th December 2009:
only one word for you mate.LAME!

Author's Response: like ur stories r any better

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