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3 Reviews Found
Review #1, by sapphire snape First Impressions
29th August 2010:
I think it good so far i hope you carry on with this story as it would be verry goood !!

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Review #2, by evilxgreenxeyes First Impressions
3rd January 2010:
OMG MORE!!! MORE WOMAN! WRITE MOREE!!!

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Review #3, by Ann Ravenwood First Impressions
22nd December 2009:
Your concept is intriguing, but your execution is plagued with punctuation, capitalization and grammar errors to distraction: Could have, would have, used to, e.g. I sugget heeding the recommendations of your grammar check.

"Her deep blue eye fell onto the castle" in your first paragraph makes me wonder if it's a typo, or if she's like Moody.

I like that Snape appreciates her efforts in the resistance.

Concept 9/10.
Grammar/punctuation/proofreading 3/10

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