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Reading Reviews for Secret Heartache
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by spencefa Rita's Truth

8th September 2010:
Story was/is excellant. Very good reading. Job well done.

Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate that.

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Review #2, by oldSarge Rita's Truth

11th May 2010:
Excellent story! Harry always seems to take emotions to the extreme so this story is probably a lot like he would act. I can easily see how he would get to the point where he didn't care anymore. I especially liked how Hermione didn't waste any time over "not hurting Ron". I really don't think Harry or Hermione would seriously give up their present and futures just to not hurt Ron or Ginny. It would only hurt worse later on in the relationships. Anyway, I would love to see a sequel...

Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted to really capture the spirit of what makes him "Harry Potter", the same little boy Rowling created in her books. I'm really glad you liked it, and I'll see what I can do about a sequel, though this story was probably a fluke.

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Review #3, by Wilbur Rita's Truth

31st December 2009:
I really liked the story, however I have a correction, Ginny's eyes are brown, not blue. But compared to other stories on this site, that's nothing. So great story, I really enjoyed reading it, excellent writing.

Author's Response: Actually, according to the laws of genetics, if Ron has blue eyes, both his parents need blue eyes, so Ginny and all the rest of the Weasley children need blue eyes.

But what does it matter what color Ginny Weasley's eyes are?

Anyway, I'm glad you liked the story. Thanks for reading.

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Review #4, by Mz Potter18 Rita's Truth

22nd December 2009:

Author's Response: Yes! Someone reviewed! I'm so glad you liked it. Sometimes when I write I just know a story/chapter came out really well, and I was anxious to see if anyone agreed with me on this one.

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