SARAH! This was totally, incredibly, fantastically wonderful!
It was the most adorable missing moment I've ever read and your talent really made it come to life. The description was beautiful and I could really imagine it all playing out in front of me. I really adored the dream sequence. It was SO beautiful and amazing to read. Really vivid ^_^.
As for the relationship you created between Lily and James - it was FGBFHTREJVHTY perfect! They just seemed like the perfect couple and I really liked how Lily felt about the unborn Harry. They didn't get to spend a lot of time together, but this was ridiculously sweet and I could really see it happening.
I LOFFED IT!
Jane xxxAuthor's Response: I'm so glad that you thought the dream sequence was good :D Jane you are too too nice to me. What ever will I do with all the ego pills you have just given me? You are such a fantastic reviewer and you have given me such confidence! Thank you so much loff!
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