Please update this story soon!! I found it last year, and loved it - I would love to read the full story!! It's driving me crazy - what happens next? If you have abandoned this story (pleasegodno) then could you send me a basic plot summery at megt16734 @ hotmail . com (remove spaces) - or at least respond to let me know when you're updating. Previews wouldn't hurt either...lolAuthor's Response: Oh god, I am so sorry, this story has been on hold for way too long. I have a basic summary of all the chapters which I could send to you if it is driving you REALLY insane, but I'm going to start writing again in the new year so if you want the full effect you might have to wait it out until then! But thankyou so much for your dedication to the story, and I promise I could never abandon Indigo XD
I have already written the end and once its done I even have vague plans for a sequel, so I hope you stick around! Report Review
Wow, I love this story! It's so well written and I'm so like Cally :)Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I'm kind of having writers block for this at the moment, but I hope I can get over it soon 'cus I so love writing this. And if you're like Cally then you're awesome. She might be getting her own story soon, so look out for that!
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Wow! This is such a good start to the story and the characters are really open and ones that you can connect with. I loved the coffee reminds me of one of my friends who carries around a flask if coffee. Can't wait to see where the story goes, keep writing and post again soon please!! Report Review
And... just saying, i think that's the best disclaimer ever. 8PAuthor's Response: Thanks! I have a lot of fun writing silly disclaimers. And a lot of fun writing silly chapters too. I'm glad you liked the story! Report Review
I love this! So amazing! XD
I love James! and I love Indigo! and I love this story!
Please update soon! :)
10/10Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I'm a little stuck with the next chapter but it shouldn't be too long.
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omj omj omj omj gr8! xAuthor's Response: Not quite sure what omj stands for, but I'm assuming it's good, so thanks again!! Report Review
i am really luvin this story! its totally awesome and so different!!! :) xAuthor's Response: Thanks! I try to always add a different spin on my stories so they're not just a blatant copy. Report Review
This is rly good- well done!!! :)Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it! And thanks for reviewing, it makes my day. Report Review
I'm intrigued, keep it up :)Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! The actual story doesnt really begin for another few chapters, this is mostly just background stuff, but I'm hoping people will stick with it until it gets good! There sheould be a new update soon, so look out for it. Thanks for the review! Report Review
This is a really good story. I love how the main character is an OC and she is a muffle. It's original and really good. I don't like Ally but I'm not supposed to. Can't wait for the 5th chapter. :DAuthor's Response: Glad you like it! Indigo is so much fun to write, I've always been intruiged as to what magic would look like through a muggles eyes and this was the perfect opportunity to write it. ANd yeah, Ally is a bit sickening isn't she! But she's fun to write aswell. Look out for the next chapter, and thanks for the review! Report Review
This was really good. I like where the plot is going. You have a good story going on here :)
10/10Author's Response: Thanks! This is the first story I've written that I've ever taken kind of seriously, so I'm glad that people seem to like it. Look out for the next chapter! Report Review
Liked this chapter, Ally sounds bit oo good to be true and definatly not right for James! :) Looking forward to more, PGAuthor's Response: Thanks! I had so much fun writing Ally, she's so annoyingly nice, exactly the kind of person I hate =P. More as soon as exam period ends and I can stop revising things I'll never learn! Report Review
Usually I don't really like very many next generation fan fics but I really like this one. Keep writing it it's good :DAuthor's Response: Thanks! I know what you mean about Next Gen fics, I don't really know why I'm writing one, but I'm having too much fun with it to stop! Keep an eye out for the next chapter =P Report Review
I absolutely love this idea of a story! The chapters are written well and the characters are awesome. I can't wait to see where this goes. I usually only read stories where the main character is magical, but this is great. Please give us more chapters soon! Thanks!Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! I myself have never actually read a story with a Muggle protaganist, so I know what you mean, but Indigo just didn't feel like a witch to me, so I'm glad you like it anyway. There should be a chapter in about a week, as soon as I have access to my own computer again! Report Review
I like it!
And I love the whole music-thing here =)
And the fact that Indigo is a muggle really is also brilliant.
Keep on writing this story!Author's Response: I'm really glad! Music is a huge part of my life, so I like encorporating it into stories like this - glad you like it too! And, although I've never read/written a story about a muggle before, I just kind of felt like Indigo had to be one. A new chapter is in the queue, so keep an eye out! Report Review
it was asome! please write more!Author's Response: Glad you thought it was 'asome'! More soon =P Report Review
Interesting story! Like how close she is to ron and hermione :) nice addition to their family! Oh, wait...Cally, too!Author's Response: Thanks! I have two friends who are like this - they call each others' parents mum and dad, etc. And I'm glad you like Cally! She'll have a bit more of a plot line later! Report Review
This is an incredibly interesting story. I can't wait to see where it goes. :) Update soon!Author's Response: I'm really glad you like it! Updates will hopefully be very soon. Report Review
love the plot!
please UPDATE SOON! 10/10Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! Updates as soon as Word decides it like me again and releases all my documents from it's lair of doom :D Report Review
Wow, loved it! :D
It's kinda cool that's Indigo is a muggle, and James is older than her (plus he has a girlfriend, which turns the story into a bit more complicated one, which means to me, more interesting).
I liked it that you made James all grown-up (he finished school, soon he's going to work and move into his own flat and all... I like that :P).
Just one thing, James and Rose's family supposed to be really close and in your story I didn't saw it quite as I was expecting to, why's that?
And it kinda bothered me that Indigo calls Hermione and Ron mummy and daddy, don't know why. >Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it! This story has been nagging about in my head for ages, so it's kind of a whole world to me - I'm having a lot of trouble getting it down onto the page. Also, I know that the Weasley's should be really close - and I think that they are, but Rose is kind of withdrawn from it all. Her and Indigo are basically a super-exclusive group for two, and they don't have any time for other friends.
The Mummy and Daddy thing - I know it's odd, but to me it just fit. I have two friends who are so close they do that, and I don't know but I just kind of liked it. Sorry if it bothers you :P Report Review
I love it. Carry on!Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter will be up as soon as I get word back on my computer :P Report Review
This story is going straight to my favourite list - I loved every word of it!
Well done :)Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! That really means a lot, and there's more coming soon (hopefully, if I stop getting coursework) so watch this space! Report Review
I really like the first two chapters, and I´m curious about the following ones... :)
Keep going, you did a good jobAuthor's Response: Thanks! I should be updating soon, as soon as Word starts cooperating with me, so keep an eye out! Report Review
just a great story line i do hope you will continue with itAuthor's Response: Thanks! I'm definitely going to continue with it. Report Review
i like the idea of a story seen through the eyes of a muggle friend s with wiches its greatAuthor's Response: Glad you like it! Report Review
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