Reading Reviews for Untimely Demises
10 Reviews Found

Review #1, by ac0100392 One Shot

27th October 2012:
I thought that it was rushed into the death if Harry too quickly in this chapter and I liked how you never killed dumbledore :) A pretty good chapter well done

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Review #2, by Book_Nerd05 One Shot

2nd April 2005:
Awww, that was sad but really good. The reviews ruined the ending though! Next time I shall read them after I read the story!lol!

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Review #3, by McFlyRule One Shot

6th March 2005:
wow i never guessed you would kill of Harry. That is shocking.

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Review #4, by Scorpio One Shot

17th January 2005:
wow.... sad... but I liked it. It's kind of poetic in a way...

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Review #5, by SeaMar One Shot

16th November 2004:

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Review #6, by Professor Glitch ErrorWeaver One Shot

1st June 2004:
Convoluted on first read. I kept finding myself re-reading lines three or four times in order to figure out what was going on. Outside that, the ending seemed too short and unrealistic; Dumbledore would have much, much more to say than that. Seems more like a propogation of a book seven theory than a fic; however, putting that opinion aside, this is a relatively good ficlet, but it leaves more to be desired.

Author's Response: I have a response for that, too, and this is actually a good excuse. Heh. I wrote this for a Mugglenet contest and it had to be 1,000 words or less. I made it a bit longer for the purpose of posting it here, but I didn't mess with it too much. Hehe. -Drako Malfoi

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Review #7, by jake epstein One Shot

1st April 2004:
another amazing tale! you are definately my favorite author!

Author's Response: Omg... No one has ever called me that before. -goes into happy hysterics- -Drako

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Review #8, by alissa One Shot

30th March 2004:
that is soo sad! it's a very god one shot fic! i need to find something happy to read now...

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Review #9, by pinkgurlkm One Shot

20th March 2004:
omfg that was so sad!!! and it does make sense, for harry to die like that... that was sooo good

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Review #10, by meghan One Shot

10th March 2004:
aaww that was good but sad

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