{reviewid: 2613838, reviewer: 'ScoRose4eva'}
9th November 2011:
in your story harry and ginny married on my 8th birthday :D i love it but it does jump a bit too much
Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
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{reviewid: 2605049, reviewer: 'Bella'}
20th October 2011:
I absolutely loved it, I was completely devastated when I found out the Harry potter series had finished. Then I found this sight, ur finishing story has been my favorite! I had all these ideas about what happened between the end of the battle and 19 years from now! Ur story has settled my whizzing mind and i know i will still cherish and read harry potter from this day forward.
Author's Response: Me too and with the movies ending it was like omg. Im so glad you enjoyed my story so much and thank you so much for reading and reviewing :)
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{reviewid: 2575625, reviewer: 'Gracie'}
22nd August 2011:
Chapter 7 made me cry very hard
PS I would give your story 2230/10 but sadly I can't
Author's Response: Aww thank you :) I'm very sorry but im glad you touched you
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{reviewid: 2569921, reviewer: 'HermyWeasly'}
13th August 2011:
This story is really amazing! I love, love, love it! I love the way it has a very origional plot with just the right amount of romance! :)
Author's Response: Why thank you very much. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It was my first fanfic and i was nervous about it but i've put a few up since then and always like reviews for them but i stopped checking this one, so thank you :) I'm absolutely touched.
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{reviewid: 2480316, reviewer: 'RosalieHaleDiggory'}
14th February 2011:
Dude dis is an AWESOME story! u r d BEST author ever (apart frm JKR of course)! as i said b4 u r my MOST FAV. author!!! i even pick u over my best frnd! btw d story was great! it was awesome how Harry defeated Voldemort all over again!!! n it was a really gud idea putting Lily as d eldest. very sad :'( dat Anna had 2 die but it was a great idea bringing d Marauders, Lily n all d others bac 4 d battle. (d 10/10 is 4 all ur stories)
Author's Response: WOW Big ego boost for me :) Thank you so much i havent really thought about this story in a while and i looked at it and was amazed to find this amazing review. Thank you for reading and reviewing and thank you so so so much for making my day, wait my week, my month :)
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{reviewid: 2469670, reviewer: 'bluerosebud96'}
23rd January 2011:
AWWW!! That story was the most wonderfullest story ever! It was so sweet!!
Author's Response: Thanks, it was my first story and well i liked it at the time but i have to say my newer stories are better :) But thank you for reading and reviewing
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{reviewid: 2354722, reviewer: 'gred%20and%20forge'}
1st June 2010:
james sirius is the eldest but i guess its your story and you can do as you please.
good story!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I know James Sirius is the eldest but i thought a daughter would be more fun and i was right :)
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{reviewid: 2354715, reviewer: 'fawkes'}
1st June 2010:
love the proposal! :P
great story so far! cant wait to read more!
10/10
Author's Response: Thanks heaps :)
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{reviewid: 2336546, reviewer: 'rb2312'}
22nd April 2010:
thought for a minute that Fawkes gad come to replace Hedwig.
great story thus far
Author's Response: Cheers for the nice review and taking the time to leave your thoughts :)
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{reviewid: 2330582, reviewer: 'I%20LUV%20HP'}
11th April 2010:
i really love this story and i only just found it again :D
amazing writing
Author's Response: Thanks heaps. I hope you enjoy the rest of it.
Please let me know what you think of the rest.
Thanks
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{reviewid: 2320356, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
25th March 2010:
this story was great but i hope u know that James Sirius is older than Albus Severus and Lily Luna Potter. other than that, this story was absolutely fantastic! keep up the good work please!^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
Author's Response: Thanks so much for continuely reading my story and leaving reviews, it means a lot to me to have had someone read this story all the way through, you were along this journey with me from day one so thanks :)
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{reviewid: 2320288, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
25th March 2010:
finally! i'm glad Harry and the others managed to defeat Voldemort and the rest of the Death Eaters. next chapter now!^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
Author's Response: Yes it was about time! Thanks again, hope you enjoy the next one!
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{reviewid: 2320283, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
25th March 2010:
this is getting very interesting however i found some mistakes.
1. Dominque - Dominique
2. quaffels - quaffles
i hope i could help u. next chapter now!^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
Author's Response: Thanks it has definitley helped ") Thanks!
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{reviewid: 2320275, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
25th March 2010:
it's very sad that Anna died but i hope that Harry will defeat again Voldemort.^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
Author's Response: Its Harry anythings possible! Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
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{reviewid: 2320125, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
25th March 2010:
again, i'm so sorry i only got to review now but i have been busy these last weeks. anyway, i liked this chapter.^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
Author's Response: Thats fine i appreciate you taking the time to review at all. Thanks! :)
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{reviewid: 2315982, reviewer: 'siledubhghlase'}
17th March 2010:
You've got a nice framework here, but you're rushing the story. Slow it down. You've tossed Harry and Ginny into a sexual relationship with too much baggage between them. It seems that less than an hour before, she'd slapped him and yelled at him and he left. That's not healthy, unless it's a plot-device meant to rear its ugly head later on...which I don't really foresee here.
Please know that I'm not picking on you. This has great potential, but it's rushed. Take it slow. You have to go through validation anyway, so just take your time with each chapter and dress it out more. It needs the emotion of the first chapter.
Author's Response: I have already finished this story so i hope you like what i've done the beginning of their relationship leads to the main story, so i was rushing because i hate stories that drag on they annoy me so i made a choice. Thanks for reviewing though and please keep reading.
For future reference if you don't like the chapter please don't review :)
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{reviewid: 2315970, reviewer: 'siledubhghlase'}
17th March 2010:
Okay...stomach is on the floor. Ginny slapped Harry and he left. Typical. He feels as though she's rejected him and it's brood and self-recrimination time. And no sooner does he arrive at his own house--I doubt he thinks of Grimmauld Place as home anymore (if he ever did)--he finds Fawkes with a message tied to his leg. More guilt before he even opens the thing. Holding back tears...holding back tears. There's more to read, siledubhghlase. Just breathe, girl...
NICE OPENING!
Author's Response: Thanks! This review was one of a kind and made me smile, thanks for reading and reviewing and i look forward to your thoughts in the future :)
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{reviewid: 2311862, reviewer: 'Lily%20luna%20potter%20malfoy'}
| Review #18, by Lily luna potter malfoy | Together |
10th March 2010:
I hought it was good
Author's Response: Thanks heaps :)
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{reviewid: 2311739, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
10th March 2010:
another fantastic chapter of urs and i'm going to read the next chapter. i'm enjoying this story so far...^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
Author's Response: I hope you enjoy the rest of the story and thanks for the review. :)
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{reviewid: 2311733, reviewer: 'Aurorofthelight'}
10th March 2010:
Magnificent story and a blockbuster ending! I really enjoyed your fresh and exciting storyline and you did a great job of crafting the story! Held the readers on the edge of their seats until the end! Great Job! Thanks for the ride! :)
Author's Response: You're so very welcome. Thanks for reading and the fantastic review. :)
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{reviewid: 2311677, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
10th March 2010:
aww Harry and Ginny's wedding was well written and cute. i'm so sorry i only got to review now! i have been a bit busy with school.^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
Author's Response: Thanks again :)
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{reviewid: 2311425, reviewer: 'JJ'}
10th March 2010:
this is amazing i couldnt stop reading
please write the last chapter and make it just as amazing as the rest of ur story
Author's Response: Thanks
The last chapter is currently been validated so it'll be up hopefully by tomorrow :)
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{reviewid: 2311412, reviewer: 'JJ'}
10th March 2010:
WOW
ive read a lot of stories about harry and ginnys life after the war and lors of them are boring but this one really keeps you interested and has some ingenious plot twist please keep writing
Author's Response: Thank you so much, i just didnt want their lives to be all shiny just yet, as horrible as that sounds :) Thanks again
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{reviewid: 2310692, reviewer: 'hannahdaspannah'}
8th March 2010:
Wow! Can't describe it anymore than that. I thought Ginny was a goner then. Powerful & well written chapter. I really like this story & will be sorry to see it end.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. It means a lot to me to hear what you think. I'm really glad you enjoyed this chapter i was going to kill Ginny off but in the end i couldn't bring myself to do it.
I put a hell of a lot of effort into this story and am so glad it was enjoyed by my readers. Hope you like the last chapter, just cleaning up some loose ends.
Thanks heaps for the review :)
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{reviewid: 2309153, reviewer: 'themissingpotter'}
5th March 2010:
Fantastic idea Ron had. I think just the sight of all those who have fallen in the wars would be enough to unnerve someone just a bit. Also the dialogue between Ginny and Lily at bedtime was just too cute for words. I think that is my favorite part.
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
I'm so glad you liked it. It's quite hard trying to put everything that's in my head down on paper but i don't think it's to bad.
Thanks for reading and reviewing and i hope you enjoy the next part. :)
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