i love this story!! your Rose is just perfect, shes flirty and daring yet mysterious and demure x3
(also, its a relief that shes not always smothered by 13829 relatives)

can't wait to read the unbelievable outcome~

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i really really really like it! the portrayal of the characters is great and different and unique. update soon - because i'm dying to know what happens next!

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Ahhh, I am still loving this story. It's unique, and amazing and well thought out.
Keep it up!
Much love!

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Oh Rose is so sneaky. She should have been a Slytherin.

xoxo
~Marcia

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This story is extremely suspenseful, which is a good thing, hats of to you. Not many people are able to successfully apply suspense with out overdoing it or under doing it, you have a near perfect amount, just enough to keep the reader hooked but not to much so the reader doesn't lose interest

xoxo
~Marcia

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Fabulous job, your writing is very suspenseful and that definitely draws the reader in.

xoxo
~Marcia

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Haha, I love how this is all in Scorp's POV, because I hate it when its in Rose's and they have Scorp all mysterious and then change it to Scorp's for a chapter explaining how much he was in love with her and that sort of stuff.
I also love how its she who is mysterious this time. Oh, and I just love the idea to begin with. I bet she's not a virgin. She pretty much can't be.
One critique though: It seems to be a little bit rambly and run on sentence-y in some places.
But I loved it and am eagerly awaiting an update.
Much love!

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This story looks really interesting.
I really like scorpius's character
10/10
Please update soon:)

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Personally, i love Rose. Her character is amazing, it's like she knows what she's doing but at the same time she makes it seem as if she doesn't notice what effect she has on him, as if it's normal for her to act that way with everyone. She doesn't seem calculating or fake for that matter like some characters would if they acted like that. does any of that make sense? Lol. And I love Scorpius as well, he makes me laugh. He's really sweet and your portrayal of him is really good!

Update soon!
- Elisa

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i am in love with your portrayal of rose. absolute perfection.
and poor Scorpius totally getting trapped in her very skilled web.
cannot wait for the next update

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Very interesting update! Now, is Rose? Fair is fair.

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That was a really good first chapter! The interaction between the two characters is really believable and funny to read as well :) I'm glad you're writing in third tense but in Scorpius' pov rather than Rose. It's refreshing to see because so many stories are from Rose's pov and not many are from Scorpius' pov. You're characters seem real so thumbs up on that. I like this story, the plot is really interesting and I can't wait to see how it develops.

Update soon!
- Elisa

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Ooh, how delicious a story this is! Reminds me of another...can't remember...but that one started with year one (do you know it? talking to the portraits by Rose, then Scorp does the same to figure her out?) Can't wait for more!

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I love how you portrayed rose as a mysterious,seductive know-it-all!Scorpius sounds adorable. Nice chapter image. Kaya scodelario is the bomb (:

Keep up the good work!

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Okay, then. I liked their "rally" of sorts.

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This is absolutely brilliant, you balance the tones of playfulness and lust quite well. Great work and I really look forward to reading the rest

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that was a brill first chapter!
ha i love how rose is the real flirt instead of scorpius most other stories have him as the biggest tease!
well ill be looking forward to more chapters!
=)

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