I loved this chapter, I can't wait to see where you take it. Please update as soon as you can :D Report Review
pleeaassee update soon Report Review
Well I'm interested, Dominique/Scorpius, not a couple I'm used to!
Don't worry, it was a good prologue ;)
Post another chapter soon, please! Report Review
I clicked on this pretty quickly (I love Dom stories, especially the different ones) and fell in love with it instantly.
Matthew seems so mean, I can see him in my mind begging to be back with Dom in no time. I love the sound of badgirl Dom, I can't wait to see more of that.
I can't wait to see which cousins you put her with (if you choose to :D). I bet that her boy cousins are going to absolutely slaughter him. :P I can't wait for more. Update soon! Report Review
wow, really glad i found this fic before it has, like 39 million reads! can't wait to see what happens, you're really talented, loving this first chapter! go you! :)
a new fan:
please update soon! xAuthor's Response: ahah THANK YOU! That really means alot me have 39 million reads psh you making me blush! Thank you thank you thank you! And my computer broke and I lost three chapters i already written! But don't worry I'm working on it now, the second chapter will be up soon promise! Report Review
Ohhh you must keep writing!
I can't see what happens next!
That Matthew guy is a jerk, and i wonder how dom's cousins are going to react after not going to the same school in years.
becca xxAuthor's Response: I will don't worry. I lost like three chapters when my computer broke but i will rewrite! Soon promise! Thanks for the comment and reading! Report Review
haha, I almost forgot to write in the box! great story, I have read your other fic, betting on the heart, too, both of them are fantastic! :D Keep writing, and updating, of course :DAuthor's Response: Thank you! That means alot and thanks for checking this one out! Report Review
omg. i read the book of luke & i loved it.
im excited for this =]Author's Response: I know the book of luke was so good! Thanks for the comment and reading! Report Review
good story i liked it. but how many nice girls have blue hair?Author's Response: But how did she get her blue bangs? Read the second chapter and you'll find out! Thanks for reading and commenting! Report Review
I have to say, I really like this story. It started out pretty interesting, and I like how you write Dominique's thoughts. Cant wait for the second chapter.Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and commenting!! Report Review
OMG! The book of luke! I recognized this instantly :] I love that book and there's no reason this shouldn't be at least as goodAuthor's Response: OMG I Know itss so goood!! I was like searching for a Harry Potter fanfic of it and I couldn't find any and I was like 'Why can't I just write one?" Thanks for the read and comment! Report Review
Cool story keep witingAuthor's Response: Thanks for being the first comment!! Report Review
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