Hello! I'm here from the forums to check out your entry. I thought it was super adorable, and very much keeping with your scenario which is good. My favorite lines were "hey hot tamolly!" and "rough life being popular". Those made me chuckle out loud! There were a few grammar issues and the story was a little short. However, I think your characterization of Arthur was good, and (though I always imagined Gideon and Fabian as being older than Molly) I thought they were entertaining as well. Good job, and I'll either post it in the forum or shoot you a PM about the winners of the challenge when the deadline rolls around. Thanks so much for the time and effort you put into my challenge! Report Review
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