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Review #1, by Rosie Flameir Hide, but don't seek

21st January 2012:
OMG i love this story!!! it's so funny/brilliant/hilarious/spectacular etc. Wow! write faster so i can read more! :D

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Review #2, by Nevermore_EAP Cooking Sherry, Fruits, and Family

13th May 2011:
This is pretty great! But I don't think that they would be that jugdemental, and HOW IN THE NAME OF MERLIN ARE THEY GOING TO GO TO THE BATHROOM WITHOUT FREAKING OUT! just sayin, if it were me.

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Review #3, by snazzymuse Hide, but don't seek

13th July 2010:
seriously one of my favorite stories EVER. I absolutely love howswitching bodies has made them realize new things about each other, especially how both of them are kind of discovering feelings. I am super excited to see them fulfill the prophecy too lol. plus this chapter was AMAZING, I literally laughed out loud when Rose went off on Cynthia haha. keep up the good work and update soon! (:

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Review #4, by J adore_la_magie  Hide, but don't seek

21st June 2010:
HAHA ! this is genious !!! love it

Author's Response: thanks a bunch!

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Review #5, by couldyoureallyknow Hide, but don't seek

9th June 2010:
please write more soon this is a really good story !!!

Author's Response: Thanks!!! It's reviews like this that motivate me to keep writing. Updating asap!

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Review #6, by Dragon_Slayer_09 Hide, but don't seek

24th May 2010:
Ooohh. i like it!! Cannot wait for more! Update soon... things are getting interesting! =]

Author's Response: I will definitely try to update soon, and thanks :)

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Review #7, by Ariana Hide, but don't seek

15th May 2010:
This is intense! I love it! I want to know what they do to get changed back though!

Author's Response: We'll just have to see then won't we?
Thanks for reading!


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Review #8, by Miss Hippydoggg Hide, but don't seek

15th May 2010:
Hello,

Urgh. Sorry I haven't been reviewing your excellent chapters! I've been terribly busy this new year. But anyhow. Urgh, you're doing so good on this story! Little grammatical mistakes. Nice paragraphs with nice structures. 9.5/10.
How are you? Have any cheese lately?
Heh. (:

Sarah.

Author's Response: Hello!
I've been busy too
I'm kind of dragging my feet a bit with this story but once exams are over I'll get back into it


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Review #9, by Avanell 2 Hide, but don't seek

14th May 2010:
great, awesome update! loved it :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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Review #10, by bwen Hide, but don't seek

26th April 2010:
grr..I am so excited with this story.I though this will end up like s0me of the story here,WIP,. I hope it will not. Almost every I day I check it here to know if you post a new chap. You really make me smile.

Author's Response: aww thats so nice! Thanks so much!
:)


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Review #11, by bwen Hide, but don't seek

26th April 2010:
grr..I am so excited with this story.I though this will end up like s0me of the story here,WIP,. I hope it will not. Almost every I day I check it here to know if you post a new chap. You really make me smile.

Author's Response: haha no WIP
I'm still working on this story, I jsut have some things I'm working on now, like school

thanks for the review!


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Review #12, by spam_up_sam Hide, but don't seek

26th April 2010:
I really loved the pace of this chapter, it was fast and exciting. Oh that little bit where Scorpius was given the flag and all he could bring himself to do was give it a pathetic shake was hilarious, I could really imagine it.
Left us with a cliff hanger there, can't wait for you to update =]
spam_up_sam

Author's Response: Thanks! This one was kind of short but I just needed to put something up.
I'm going to try and make it a little less superficial, I've been reading a lot of good stuff that has some depth to it (ahem, your stories) and I want to write something with more meaning than that. It can still be, (and will be) funny though.

Thanks for the review!


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Review #13, by dracos_hotter Oh Bugger...

7th April 2010:
Oh my gosh I love your story! I've seen the 'take a walk in my shoes' thing before, but this is brilliant =D

Following!

xE

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm still figuring out whats going to happen, but ive got most of my ideas down. I'm posting the next chapter soon!

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Review #14, by Amberfire Oh Bugger...

20th March 2010:
oh lol very nice
I love the idea and they way you've done it!!! Its a cliched idea, but you've made it work so well :D (I love cliches anyway)
heh heh the seems like it will be a VERY interesting and amusing story :D

Romance novels hah, I love 'em too, but that would have been slightly awkward for dear Rosie mwahaha.
oooh I'm so looking forward to the next chapter with Rose attempting to play Quidditch!
Well done on a very attention-capturing start, eagerly anticipating the next chappie :)

Ahhahaa I am actually that lame to go and count the curse words ;)
there was:
Name callings:
Tosser - 1
Prat - 1
Curses:
Merlin's sake - 1
Bloody hell - 1
Shit - 1 (or two if you count them both saying it...)
buggering bugger/s/buggering bugger bloody - 3
(or there abouts; I could have missed some)
yeah I'm so cool ;)

10/10
Love Amberfire

Author's Response: haha! Thanks so much for the review! Yeah it is pretty cliche, but I guess thats what I get for watching all those disney movies when I was a kid XD.

as promised, heres your virtual cookie!
~virtual cookie~


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Review #15, by spam_up_sam Oh Bugger...

19th March 2010:
Haha romance novels to boys must be an incredibly ghastly experience!
This is my favourite chapter so far, I thought the writing was just spot on and both characters came into their own. It was a great read, and very funny too. =]
10/10 deary!
p.s, I'm too lazy to count all the swear words because I've had a day from hell at uni, so can I have a virtual cookie anyway? =P Only joking!
spam_up_sam

Author's Response: Thanks!
next chapter soon, and its a funny one!


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Review #16, by evanlyn Oh Bugger...

19th March 2010:
Nice chapter!!! I like Scorpius alot!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

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Review #17, by Marsian. The Lion And The Serpent

18th March 2010:
Well, It's not bad! But the plot..it's sort of cliched. I mean there are tons of other fics with the same plot, but nonetheless, it's pretty extraordinary!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

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Review #18, by SexyDoorFrames Cooking Sherry, Fruits, and Family

15th March 2010:
This chapter was really good. I enjoyed it a lot. I also like the way that Rose has got her mothers quidditch skills, that's awesome.

It flowed brilliantly. I also really like they way you write the characters too :D

Excellent chapter :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That's a huge compliment, because I decided to check out your sirius/nellie story and I absolutely love your writing!

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Review #19, by evanlyn Cooking Sherry, Fruits, and Family

8th March 2010:
Poor Scorpius :( You've inspired me to delve deeper into his character in my story co-captains, I had him as a relaxed/surfy/partying sort of guy but I think I might make him have a few daddy issues lol.

Author's Response: haha I'm so glad I could help to inspire you! Thanks for reading :)
~Lindsay


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Review #20, by evanlyn The Lion And The Serpent

8th March 2010:
I love the image of Scorp leaning against the wall with his hands in his pockets. It's just so cocky lol. And Rose punching him lol nice sort of allusion to Hermione and Ron.

Author's Response: Do you mean Hermione and Draco?
Thanks for reviewing! (again) :)


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Review #21, by evanlyn Scorpius Malfoy

8th March 2010:
I like how you slipped Draco's overbearing character in there, but I couldn't help but wonder if Draco's just showing love in his own way. Also the idea of Scorpius falling asleep in class and being plagued by nightmares, it's a cool, tortured sort of character, almost emo-like but the character is awesome nicely done.

Author's Response: Emo, right?
I should have made him wear black lipstick or something
XD


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Review #22, by evanlyn Rose Weasley

8th March 2010:
I love this, the sweet, girly, romantic Rose character. I don't know if that's how you meant to portray her but thats how I saw it. Very nice!

Author's Response: yup, thats a big part of her character, she's more than that though.

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Review #23, by inky Cooking Sherry, Fruits, and Family

7th March 2010:
this is so good. it's a really interesting plot line! PLEASE continue... quickly! it's gr8 and i wanna know what happens! xxx

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The plot line just sort of came to me one time (although I admit it is loosely based off of freaky friday) but I just thought, wow If these two are fighting so much, its probably because they don't understand eachother, so why not have 'em walk a mile in the others shoes! Haha, anyways this is my first fanfic so its a bit rough, but thank you so much for reviewing!

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Review #24, by Avanell 2 Cooking Sherry, Fruits, and Family

7th March 2010:
Oh, good update! How is Rose fairing? Can't wait for them to really get more perspective on one another and more ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Rose is...well we'll see how Rose is, and then after that I think we will look into Ron/Hermione and Draco/Astoria, to kindof see the whole background of Scorpius and Rose's feelings for eachother, so lookout for that!
THanks for the review,
Lindsay


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Review #25, by taps_017 Cooking Sherry, Fruits, and Family

7th March 2010:
this is a really refreshing take on the rose/scorpius tale!
i like it very much - and can't wait to see what kind of trouble they're going to get themselves into!
update soon, :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted something fresher, I mean, I've read a lot of Scorose, and I really wanted to get to the root of WHY they hate eachother, and kind of bring eachother understanding, and I was like what better way to do it than this!
And don't worry, there is plently of trouble making on the way, lol, as well as an update.
-Lindsay


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