OMG i love this story!!! it's so funny/brilliant/hilarious/spectacular etc. Wow! write faster so i can read more! :D Report Review
This is pretty great! But I don't think that they would be that jugdemental, and HOW IN THE NAME OF MERLIN ARE THEY GOING TO GO TO THE BATHROOM WITHOUT FREAKING OUT! just sayin, if it were me. Report Review
seriously one of my favorite stories EVER. I absolutely love howswitching bodies has made them realize new things about each other, especially how both of them are kind of discovering feelings. I am super excited to see them fulfill the prophecy too lol. plus this chapter was AMAZING, I literally laughed out loud when Rose went off on Cynthia haha. keep up the good work and update soon! (: Report Review
HAHA ! this is genious !!! love itAuthor's Response: thanks a bunch! Report Review
please write more soon this is a really good story !!!Author's Response: Thanks!!! It's reviews like this that motivate me to keep writing. Updating asap! Report Review
Ooohh. i like it!! Cannot wait for more! Update soon... things are getting interesting! =]Author's Response: I will definitely try to update soon, and thanks :) Report Review
This is intense! I love it! I want to know what they do to get changed back though!Author's Response: We'll just have to see then won't we?
Thanks for reading! Report Review
Urgh. Sorry I haven't been reviewing your excellent chapters! I've been terribly busy this new year. But anyhow. Urgh, you're doing so good on this story! Little grammatical mistakes. Nice paragraphs with nice structures. 9.5/10.
How are you? Have any cheese lately?
Sarah.Author's Response: Hello!
I've been busy too
I'm kind of dragging my feet a bit with this story but once exams are over I'll get back into it Report Review
great, awesome update! loved it :)Author's Response: Thanks so much! Report Review
grr..I am so excited with this story.I though this will end up like s0me of the story here,WIP,. I hope it will not. Almost every I day I check it here to know if you post a new chap. You really make me smile.Author's Response: aww thats so nice! Thanks so much!
:) Report Review
grr..I am so excited with this story.I though this will end up like s0me of the story here,WIP,. I hope it will not. Almost every I day I check it here to know if you post a new chap. You really make me smile.Author's Response: haha no WIP
I'm still working on this story, I jsut have some things I'm working on now, like school
thanks for the review! Report Review
I really loved the pace of this chapter, it was fast and exciting. Oh that little bit where Scorpius was given the flag and all he could bring himself to do was give it a pathetic shake was hilarious, I could really imagine it.
Left us with a cliff hanger there, can't wait for you to update =]
spam_up_samAuthor's Response: Thanks! This one was kind of short but I just needed to put something up.
I'm going to try and make it a little less superficial, I've been reading a lot of good stuff that has some depth to it (ahem, your stories) and I want to write something with more meaning than that. It can still be, (and will be) funny though.
Thanks for the review!
Oh my gosh I love your story! I've seen the 'take a walk in my shoes' thing before, but this is brilliant =D
xEAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! I'm still figuring out whats going to happen, but ive got most of my ideas down. I'm posting the next chapter soon! Report Review
oh lol very nice
I love the idea and they way you've done it!!! Its a cliched idea, but you've made it work so well :D (I love cliches anyway)
heh heh the seems like it will be a VERY interesting and amusing story :D
Romance novels hah, I love 'em too, but that would have been slightly awkward for dear Rosie mwahaha.
oooh I'm so looking forward to the next chapter with Rose attempting to play Quidditch!
Well done on a very attention-capturing start, eagerly anticipating the next chappie :)
Ahhahaa I am actually that lame to go and count the curse words ;)
Tosser - 1
Prat - 1
Merlin's sake - 1
Bloody hell - 1
Shit - 1 (or two if you count them both saying it...)
buggering bugger/s/buggering bugger bloody - 3
(or there abouts; I could have missed some)
yeah I'm so cool ;)
Love AmberfireAuthor's Response: haha! Thanks so much for the review! Yeah it is pretty cliche, but I guess thats what I get for watching all those disney movies when I was a kid XD.
as promised, heres your virtual cookie!
~virtual cookie~ Report Review
Haha romance novels to boys must be an incredibly ghastly experience!
This is my favourite chapter so far, I thought the writing was just spot on and both characters came into their own. It was a great read, and very funny too. =]
p.s, I'm too lazy to count all the swear words because I've had a day from hell at uni, so can I have a virtual cookie anyway? =P Only joking!
spam_up_samAuthor's Response: Thanks!
next chapter soon, and its a funny one! Report Review
Nice chapter!!! I like Scorpius alot!Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Report Review
Well, It's not bad! But the plot..it's sort of cliched. I mean there are tons of other fics with the same plot, but nonetheless, it's pretty extraordinary!Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Report Review
This chapter was really good. I enjoyed it a lot. I also like the way that Rose has got her mothers quidditch skills, that's awesome.
It flowed brilliantly. I also really like they way you write the characters too :D
Excellent chapter :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! That's a huge compliment, because I decided to check out your sirius/nellie story and I absolutely love your writing! Report Review
Poor Scorpius :( You've inspired me to delve deeper into his character in my story co-captains, I had him as a relaxed/surfy/partying sort of guy but I think I might make him have a few daddy issues lol.Author's Response: haha I'm so glad I could help to inspire you! Thanks for reading :)
~Lindsay Report Review
I love the image of Scorp leaning against the wall with his hands in his pockets. It's just so cocky lol. And Rose punching him lol nice sort of allusion to Hermione and Ron.Author's Response: Do you mean Hermione and Draco?
Thanks for reviewing! (again) :) Report Review
I like how you slipped Draco's overbearing character in there, but I couldn't help but wonder if Draco's just showing love in his own way. Also the idea of Scorpius falling asleep in class and being plagued by nightmares, it's a cool, tortured sort of character, almost emo-like but the character is awesome nicely done.Author's Response: Emo, right?
I should have made him wear black lipstick or something
XD Report Review
I love this, the sweet, girly, romantic Rose character. I don't know if that's how you meant to portray her but thats how I saw it. Very nice!Author's Response: yup, thats a big part of her character, she's more than that though. Report Review
this is so good. it's a really interesting plot line! PLEASE continue... quickly! it's gr8 and i wanna know what happens! xxxAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! The plot line just sort of came to me one time (although I admit it is loosely based off of freaky friday) but I just thought, wow If these two are fighting so much, its probably because they don't understand eachother, so why not have 'em walk a mile in the others shoes! Haha, anyways this is my first fanfic so its a bit rough, but thank you so much for reviewing! Report Review
Oh, good update! How is Rose fairing? Can't wait for them to really get more perspective on one another and more ;)Author's Response: Thank you so much! Rose is...well we'll see how Rose is, and then after that I think we will look into Ron/Hermione and Draco/Astoria, to kindof see the whole background of Scorpius and Rose's feelings for eachother, so lookout for that!
THanks for the review,
Lindsay Report Review
this is a really refreshing take on the rose/scorpius tale!
i like it very much - and can't wait to see what kind of trouble they're going to get themselves into!
update soon, :)Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted something fresher, I mean, I've read a lot of Scorose, and I really wanted to get to the root of WHY they hate eachother, and kind of bring eachother understanding, and I was like what better way to do it than this!
And don't worry, there is plently of trouble making on the way, lol, as well as an update.
-Lindsay Report Review
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