Hiya! RoxiMalfoy finally here to review your challenge entry for ya! Sorry it's taken me so long to do this...
I actually liked that you told it from Aberforth's point-of-view over Albus'. You can definitely tell that he has feelings of resentment for the two, and it makes total sense, considering what we know of the Dumbledore brothers now. And Albus not being a muggle fan at this point in time made total sense too!
This, for me, would have been a difficult pair to do, but it seems that you have done a pretty good job with it. I always love reading things about the Dumbledore's because it seems that they are far underdone in fan-fiction. Thank you so much for excepting the pair and entering my challenge! Your entry was very refreshing and I very much enjoyed reading it!! =) Report Review
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