I really liked it, I think you should make it longer though. Report Review
that was a really good start keep writing! Report Review
Cool idea! I can't wait for the next chapter. All I could say really is to maybe slow the story down a bit. To me it all seemed to happen a bit too fast otherwise it was great. Thank you. Icequeencissa Report Review
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