{reviewid: 2547197, reviewer: 'MaiWishes'}
14th July 2011:
lame u never finished
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{reviewid: 2506588, reviewer: 'Talitha'}
11th April 2011:
Aahhh! You're cruel! That cliffhanger makes me want to cry... haha, But seriously, this is so far great. I can't wait to read the next chapter. :)))
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{reviewid: 2446651, reviewer: 'DracoMalfoyLover'}
7th December 2010:
Cooleistic! And, if they're inside, how would a Daily Prophet fly to her foot?
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{reviewid: 2426793, reviewer: 'Sandy'}
22nd October 2010:
I really good, maybe you should write another chapter?
Author's Response: When I get off my lazy butt ;)
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{reviewid: 2383005, reviewer: 'BellaFan202'}
21st July 2010:
Oooh, a cliffie! How awesome is that? I like this alot, and I can't wait to read more!
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{reviewid: 2374494, reviewer: 'Cool%20Chick%2091'}
7th July 2010:
Hey Please write... I'm loving you're story!!
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{reviewid: 2364534, reviewer: 'Ginny459'}
19th June 2010:
Please keep gonig its really good... pretty please with a cherry on top!
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{reviewid: 2360022, reviewer: 'Avanelle'}
11th June 2010:
This is really intriguing. I hope you keep working on it.
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{reviewid: 2331710, reviewer: 'bainzy%20'}
13th April 2010:
Wow! This is really good! I like your style of writing (: Update soon!!
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{reviewid: 2290983, reviewer: 'Original%20Oregonian'}
27th January 2010:
I like this. :] Keep writing...
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{reviewid: 2283900, reviewer: 'meg'}
13th January 2010:
wow this sets up for an interesting read! i'm excited for more xxx
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{reviewid: 2274719, reviewer: 'Slytherin_Ravenclaw_chick'}
28th December 2009:
this is a very interesting plot. I'd like to see where this goes. Write more!
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{reviewid: 2264004, reviewer: 'phoenixy_friend'}
7th December 2009:
Try making the chapters a bit longer. Edit it, or get a beta, as there are a few mistakes (such as name capitalization) that need to be fixed.
The plot is one that has been used quite a bit, and for those of us that enjoy time travel fics, please include the words "time travel/time-travel fic" at the top of the story summary, so that we can more easily find it.
All in all, it's okay, but is needs to be polished up from a rough stone to a gleaming gem.
Author's Response: 'kay. Tahnk you! Finally some constructive criticism. ^^ It makes me happy, and I'll try to do as you say and make it longer. Thank you.
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{reviewid: 2263645, reviewer: 'Ginny%20Yeske'}
6th December 2009:
Oh my god KEEP WRITING!!!
Author's Response: Yay for cap locks, and I will always write... this story will be updated eventually
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{reviewid: 2263594, reviewer: 'dyqw1700'}
6th December 2009:
I love this so far! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Eventually I will... I'm not writng fanfics at the moment though because my teachers are being stupid.
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{reviewid: 2263206, reviewer: 'JLynn25'}
5th December 2009:
This is GREAT! Please write more really soon!!! :D
Author's Response: Oh I will... eventually.
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{reviewid: 2263180, reviewer: 'Bookworm045'}
5th December 2009:
I think this is an absolutely brilliant start to a story, I truely hope you write again soon. I love it!
:)
Peace Out.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I think I will write again soon...
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{reviewid: 2263147, reviewer: 'Bridie'}
5th December 2009:
Oooh this sounds so interesting update asap!
wow one chater in and i already know i'm hooked!
"The year all of our parents started Hogwarts..." You can literally hear the DIN DIN DIN... haha.
Author's Response: well, I always say dun dun dun
but I get what you mean. Thanks. I hope you stay hooked because that would be awesome!
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{reviewid: 2262995, reviewer: 'You%20Know%20Who'}
5th December 2009:
Wow, they are so dead, James could be happy about that then
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