It is sooo sweet and how did Victoire put it---perfect!
Really nice writing, love it!
HannaAuthor's Response: aw, thank you so much. Report Review
very sweet :) I can't believe you remembered the name Apolline, it would make sense her middle name be that since it's her mothers' name. Great job!Author's Response: Thank you very much. I thought it'd be a nice touch bringing in that name :] Report Review
this was lovely. i enjoyed it a lotAuthor's Response: thanks for taking the time to read and review. so glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
This was a great one-shot! I immensely enjoyed it. Do you think you could write some Lily/James stories? :)Author's Response: I've never really tried to write a Lily/James story, although I think their romance is a fun thing. Perhaps I'll give it a shot. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
I love this Teddy is so sweet !Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
That was just...perfect!
Your proposal idea was beautiful and the whole story was very well written.
I dont normally read next gen but I'm so glad I gave this a shot. Well done 10/10 Charly :D xAuthor's Response: Perfect?! Aw, thank you so much for reading. It was my first attempt at Next Gen so I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Report Review
I loved it! You should write more :)Author's Response: Awww, thank you. I've got another story in mind but I've rarely dabbled with Next Gen stories. Perhaps I'll try it out :] Thanks for reading and reviewing. Report Review
Very cute. :)
I loved that bit of magic with the firefly.Author's Response: Aw thanks. I'm glad it was well liked, despite its cheesiness :] Report Review
Aaaw, that was lovely! In spite of myself, I tend to envision Teddy/Victoire as a seemingly fairytale-like romance and you depicted that wonderfully here. The descriptions were beautiful, especially at the first half of the story. They seem to be your strength in terms of writing, judging by this fic. I didn't see the proposal coming (and so creatively as well!) so it was a nice suprise and fit the overall atmosphere of the story. I did find it rather odd (and a little amusing) that the ring transformed back into a firefly. How is Teddy supposed to 'put a ring on it' now? xD You established Teddy and Victoire's characters well, given the length of the story. Had it been longer, I would have liked their characters to be expanded but it's fine as it is =), with Teddy as the playful type and Victoire having a very bossy nature. With such personalities, they'd make a good fit together. Overall, it was a lovely read. Good job!
~MistyAuthor's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much. I'm glad you were able to see all that from such a short one shot xD It was my first attempt so I was a bit iffy about it. Thanks for reading and reviewing :] Report Review
I love it, please write more like this!Author's Response: Aw thank you so much. It's my first attempt at a one-shot, so the feedback is so encouraging :] Report Review
Aw, that was so cute! Such a sweet little one-shot! I loved it!
My only criticism: "Your a no good prat, Theodore Lupin."
It's you're not your. (I'm sorry, I'm an English major and am totally guilty of obsessing over grammar. My absolute biggest pet peeve, even more than your/you're, is when people confuse there, their, and they're. It just irritates me, because I'm a total dork, haha.)
Other than that though, I've got no criticism; this was really great! You're very good with imagery!Author's Response: I actually noticed that after it was validated so I fixed it up and sent it back in for revalidation. It bothers me as well so when I end up doing that it's like, gah whyyy?! Thank you for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it and the review is so helpful! Report Review
Princess Bride with the "As you wish."Author's Response: Oh wow, I hadn't even meant for that to pop up, but I do remember that from Princess Bride, lol. Report Review
That was really good I absolutely adore teddy/victoire stories and this one is really good. Great Job!!!Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! Glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
I love this, its beautiful how you captured this couple. they've got great chemistry, you can practically feel the love, ;)Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much. I'm glad I was able to portray them well :D Report Review
That was great. It was so sweet and I really enjoyed reading it! Great Job!
:)BaletGirAuthor's Response: Glad you liked it, I was aiming for sweet :D Thanks for reading! Report Review
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