I love it. Add more to it. It could acctually be a good story.

Author's Response: Thanks, I think. I have two more chapters planned. ;)

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Not bad to start. I think it would be great to develop the story around Harry and Ginny being parents while the kids are younger. We would get to see some of the trials and tribulations that all parents have and for Harry, he would get to be the parent his mom and dad never got the chance to be. Anyway, keep writing and developing you have a good place to start from.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, I understand what you are saying. However, my intention with this story was and is to write three chapters based on the verses of the song, 'Cinderella'. Otherwise it would be a good idea to explore further Harry and Ginny's development as parents.

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This is so lovely. I love stories of Harry's life after where he is allowed to grow into his happily ever after instead of being dragged down as some writers insist he must be - if that makes any sense. :) Anyway, it's excellent and I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, I know what you mean. I'm glad you like it.

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great start 4 the 1st chapter. will u update soon please?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I will update as soon as I have finished the next chapter.

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