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Review #1, by Canadian_Hogwarts Traitor

11th September 2010:
Oh my goodness! You are such a fantastic writer! Seriously! This story really shows what Remus must have gone through, not only when he found out about James and Lily's deaths, but also through the next twelve and a bit years, when he believed that two of his best friends were betrayed and killed by the third. It's an amazing piece of work! Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I always felt like Remus never quite got the attention he deserved. Sure, he was the friend that survived it all, but he was also the one that lost all three of his friends on the same night. Then he loses Sirius all over again.

That guy had one complicated life. And I really want to capture it. I'd love to write more to this story, but I can hardly remember what I had planned. >.<

Thank you for all of your lovely reviews!

Magically Yours,


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Review #2, by saraie12 Traitor

29th August 2010:
AH. That was so beautifully angsty. I've been looking for a Remus story like this for a long time, as this was worth the wait. It was short and satisfying, and the timeline you had (right after when he thinks Sirius did it) was brilliant. Honestly, I adores this. 10/10!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I love Remus and I just don't think he gets enough attention. The poor guy started out lonely, thinking he would never be accepted by anyone, made the best friends he could ever dream of, and lost them all in the same night.

I'm so glad this ended your search. :DDD

Thanks for the lovely review!


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Review #3, by momotwins Traitor

18th August 2010:
How sad! You did a great job writing Remus's emotions. His anger and despair practically leap off the screen. This is great characterization, too, it's very much the way Remus must have reacted given how he acted toward Sirius in canon when he realizes it was actually Peter who was the traitor. Excellent job!

Author's Response: Ahh, thank you so much! I really enjoyed the idea for this collection of short stories. I always felt like Remus kinda got the short straw, you know? Each of his friends was taken from him one by one.

I am so glad that I got his characterization right!

Thank you for this lovely review!


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Review #4, by spam_up_sam Traitor

24th November 2009:
Wow...great writing there, it was very powerful and very emotive, I could feel everything Remus was feeling
It caught and kept my attention throughout and for such a short piece it really puts a lot across
I'll look out for your next update =]

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!

I was a little wary of how short it was, but I couldn't really imagine making it any longer without rambling and taking away from the piece overall, so I'm glad you liked it despite it's brevity.

Thanks again!


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Review #5, by Nynfadora Traitor

23rd November 2009:
That was really good, effective in Making the reader side along with Remus' point of view and feel his emotions. I lik the idea of the siries you are planning on writing-may i make a suggestion- one of Remus' feelings during a transformation,how it feels worse now that he has no company! I really like your discriptive text as well, and the varying sentence structures are enjoyable tooo, keep it up :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

That's a good suggestion. I'll probably use it. ^^

This idea just came to mind when I was re-reading the series and I read the part where Sirius died. Remus was struggling with keeping Harry from running to the veil and I just wondered what he was feeling when all that was going on.

Thank you again.


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