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Review #1, by luckylilly75 Flashbacks

15th December 2009:
heya!! liked the story, but the flashbacks were a tad confusing, maybe you should have it as one flashback, and then say.. Later That Day. or something like that, and describe the situation a bit more. how would you have felt if you were in Rose's shoes? but i really liked it!!! Great!


Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing and thanks for the tips! Every review means so much!

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