Love the use of the veil! I'm glad I don't have to work tomorrow because I haven't been able to stop reading :)

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I was going to say something about how snape called himself the half blood prince and bring up Peter but then I remembered this is from before the 6th book. So instead I'll be you more props than I was going to originally. First off you are an amazing writer. I am loving this story and am very impressed with how well you read snapes character before the last 2 books.

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I read this story forever ago and adored it! I looked it up today on a whim and I'm so excited that I found it. I'll definitely be re-reading the whole thing!

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how many times do these people do IT?!...

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eww, it's Pettigrew. I have had it with that filthy traitor!

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Oooh, some suspense -- I like.
Good job!

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awe..poor megan :( i feel like Lily and James's relationship could've used a little more support before they got engaged, but it's still a cute story :)
another thing i noticed was some grammar mistakes! Nothing serious, just some missing commas and what not.
good chapter over all though!

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I love the way you have James and Lily's relationship set up! It's not the typical way where he's been in love with her all of these years, obsessing over her blah blah blah. Instead it's more settle and well, normal. lol! I really like it!!
I also like how you have the Marauders trying to help him out and the conflicting Peter! Great job!

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hi there! i saw a recommendation for this story on the forums and I'm glad I came over to read it! I've found it hard to find a good James/Lily story--completed even!! And this one so far seems really good! Can't wait to go on to the next chapter!

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ooh sad :( that's horrible for Megan
Rating: 10/10

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poor Meg, I feel so bad for her. And my heart nearly broke for Sirius when she said no. Great chapter
Rating: 10/10

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wow, this is getting really good
better than good
great haha
Rating:10/10

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hmmm that Peter seems a bit suspicious haha. I like that you show him as one of the guys, most people don't do that cause everyone hates him.
And this Megan chick seems pretty cool. I wonder if she'll ever tell Lily exactly what she saw
Rating: 10/10

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oooh that was a fantastic first chappy, and it's okay, my favorite kind of fics are long and complicated. I think this one will fit haha^-^
And what Dumbledore just said gave me the chills haha
Rating: 10/10

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Wow I that was good so far!

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ThIs Is An AwEsOmE sToRy!1!1!1

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So I hop on my computer one day and I have this burning desire to read your story. Well as far as I know, you're only on this site. Not realizing the date I freaked out when I couldn't find it. I googled you to death. No 'shade' no 'beginning of the end' and no 'rogue witch'. I was close to tears because I couldn't find you. Now that this site's back up and running, I am happy to say that I love this story and happy that I have the honor to read it any time I please.
As always, ~Emily

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Wow! This is probably the second or third time I've read your story and I just have to say I have great respect for you. I love that you have Lily and James wait to do anything more until after they are married. I was starting to think I was the only one who believed in abstinence on this website. I'm really glad that you went against the "norm" and stood up for what you believed in. Sorry if I sound a little wierd, I was just really proud of your story.

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Still love it as much as the first time I read it!

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so cute.

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you are a trully amazing writer, i loved your story so much, and now im gonna go read the sequel :D

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I absolutely loved this story. This was my second time reading it having read it when you first posted it. I remember i reviewed that 1st post like every chapter...
This is my favorite fanfiction story and one of the only ones that actually makes me cry. I love the way you portray all the characters and you can actually feel their emotions leap off the page. You're a brillant writer. I am so glad that I found this story again.
~Rae~

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Magnificent. I have no idea how you do it every chapter!! Much Love, Emily

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Which quote is that, that makes this chapter your favorite? I thought the scene in the bar with Lily and Megan was the most important... It carried a powerful message, anyway. Deep and intriguing as always. Much Love, Emily

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Amy... Poor girl... Great chapter! Much Love, Emily

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