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Review #1, by iheartzuko How the life goes on

20th March 2011:
This is different, but I like it too :D

Author's Response: That's good to hear, thanks! :)

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Review #2, by Rachel Benn How the life goes on

9th January 2011:
Brilliant! I've always though it'd be interesting to hear things from the point of view of a character like Mrs Weasley, especially since they seem to have an interesting life. Really good :D

Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and that you liked the idea :)
Thank you for your review!


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Review #3, by Sleeping Paige  How the life goes on

10th January 2010:
You are really not that bad at all. Like I told you last night, you are one of the few who has successfully held my attention till the end. I know this is an older piece, but I thought that I'd go through and look at your other writing. I'm glad that you are bilingual. I find it a depressing notion that most Americans (including myelf, although I'm getting along with Spanish) only speak English. I love that Bill and Charlie cause mayhem and reflect on it in your two pieces. Molly's characterization is nice, for she does not sound like a hairbrained, nagging mum. Pehaps it was Fred and George who finally pushed her over the edge with that. Well, she is a mother of seven kids, so I guess that is expected. I just have the say this: you actually have narration in your stories! *applause*. So many stories in this forum have nothing but cheap dialogue, but your pieces flow with a different technique. You are learning someething from writing. Your pieces are an enjoyable quick read. Thank you.
- sleeping paige

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! :D
Yes, from what the books say about Bill and Charlie, I figured that they might have caused some mayhem as well when they were younger :) I think Molly is just very concerned about her children; maybe that's why she's so strict later?
Thanks for all the compliments! *blush* I'm really glad you liked it! :D


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Review #4, by Maxima How the life goes on

25th December 2009:
It's great!Made me laugh,especially the "She was sure they would be perfectly capable of two more kids.Surely they wouldn't be as mischievous as her two eldest sons" part.
Nicely written,fluent plot.It deserves a 10

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!! Yeah, I just had to put that part in the story :D Thanks again, I'm glad you liked it!!

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Review #5, by amyincharleston How the life goes on

23rd December 2009:
Love this. I really like how you portrayed Molly and Arthur both and the whole thing is awesome! By the way I hardly ever give reviews that aren't critical, so I'm real serious about liking it.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! :D I feel really honoured! Glad you loved it :D

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Review #6, by Mrs_Lovegood How the life goes on

29th November 2009:
This was really a sweet story. The image of Molly stuck in a rocking chair is stuck into my mind in a really warm and fuzzy way x) And the ending is just so beautiful! "But life always went on, and Molly sincerely hoped for a better future, rather now than tomorrow, for her kids, for her family."

Thank you! For some reason you just got me some Chritmas spirit!

Author's Response: Thank you!! :D

Well, to be honest, I had a hard time giving the story a proper ending, so I'm very glad you liked it!

Haha, you're welcome :) Thanks again!


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Review #7, by Harry and Ginny How the life goes on

28th November 2009:
cute fic u have here. keep writing more great fics please.^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: thanks a lot!! :D

I'll try my best, but yeah, I'm pretty busy, so I don't know when I'll have time again :S

thanks again!


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