hey,
first of all, you seem to not get much response on this, but I want to say that I like it.
Although the praragraphs are quite long, I think it is just great.
You manage to capt the emotions very well.
Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi!
thank you for reviewing my story.
I am indeed very glad to have some feedback on this, because I like to know where I stand.
I will try to shorten my paragraphs a bit nex chapter. Thank you for the advice!
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nice! I love the way you made Draco Malfoy a more human man than he sometimes appears to be. I like stories with lots of emotions in them and I must say you got me at it!
10/10!!!

Author's Response: Ah thank you! I know, that's what I tried to do and I am glad that other people recognize the fact that I tried to picture him as a helpless person sometimes. Thanks again for this lovely review!
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hi!
I like the idea of what you are doing. If I am correct, this is going to be the sixth book in Draco Malfoy's POV? Interesting out-take. Nice character feelings too. I like the way you made Draco Malfoy seem at least a little bit more human than he usually does. :)
10/10!

Author's Response: hi!
thank you for the review!
you are correct indeed: the majority of this fic is going to take place during Draco Malfoy's sixth year.
I thank you for my character scheme of Draco. I felt like I had to make him more human than he is used to be shown as.
Thanks again for reviewing!
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