Good start you have to continue this story Report Review
I do love more Slytherin based storied. Where you see more of them than the trio, I mean. This is sure an interesting twist, both Hermione and Draco, a team in Slytherin. I'm very curious to how this is going to evolve.
And I hope this'll update this soon.Author's Response: Thank you! I've been being so so so lazy about this story, but I'm finishing up my schooling and then I will fully commit to writing weekly. Thanks for the response! Report Review
I love this first chapter! This plot has the potential to go so many places, and I can't wait to see what you do with it. Keep up the good work! And I will wait patiently for more :) Report Review
Please continue, I'd love to read more!
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Woot! Can't wait to see where this goes. :) Report Review
I think that it is a great start to that story well done!!!Author's Response: Aw, thanks! Report Review
Totally awesome and waiting for more..
Keep up the good work!
~Jenn Report Review
I like the plot concept. this could be an interesting story, I only ask that the chapters be made longer.
oh and one little thing:
'We are you asking me, instead of one of the others? Why not Ron, or Harry! You've seen how desperate they are to be part of the Order.' Hermione wondered in confusion. 'They'd both be eager to help!'
I think the 'We' should be a 'Why' right? other than that, can't wait to read more! Excellent first chapter.
-LauraAuthor's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!
I'm on the same page about the chapter length, I'm going to try to make them progressively longer. I just wanted this one to be a kind of introduction into the story, and then I'm going to start out with a lot more plot.
And, you are right, it is supposed to be a "why" not a "we". I'll go and change that.
Thanks for the read! Report Review
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