Oh my Gosh! That was hilarious! Just hilarious! Especially the part before The Three Super Part Veela Heroes to come. Haha! Poor, helpless Teddy. I have 2 little siblings at home and I just know how it feels. Just take in count I have a big family, too, and when we all gather together… It’s all just like after the adults closed the door behind them and well... everything went wild. I don’t think Teddy was the problem. He wasn’t some kind of worst babysitter... he just had to deal with some little monsters. Haha! Excepting Fred, of course – the anger, the only snoring angel.
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Hahaa =)) I can just imagine that happening !! I always imagined Rose as a chocoholic !! You're a great writer so keep it up please :) x
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haha teddy is so funny and i love the ending to the story!Author's Response: thank you! :D Report Review
Haha, that was so sweet, I like how you've made the Weasley-Delacour children really well mannered and controlled and the others all completley wild and crazy :) But isn't Victoire like, 2 years younger than Teddy instead of being a year older?? Anyway, still a great story :) x x xAuthor's Response: OH. yes, about that. see, back when I wrote this, which was about a year ago, I was completely clueless :P
I'll be sure to update the chapter with the right ages, probably changes a few things here and there to improve the chapter. Thank you muchly for your review, though! ^_^ Report Review
Awww so cute, I adore Ted.Author's Response: gah, thank you! Report Review
lol i seriously laughed out loud when Victoire said "avada kedevra" That was a hilarious one-shot! can't wait to read number 2 :) 10/10!Author's Response: Thanks! ^_^ Ah, I'll hurry up with the second, just for you. XD
Or, you know, start it. :P Report Review
great job! that was really funny and I adored the ending.Author's Response: Thankyou! ^_^
I'm really glad you did. :) Report Review
Ha I love it!!!
I've always had a soft spot of Ol' Teddy :P;)
10Author's Response: haha, you're not alone. :)
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lol! hilarious. loved it. great stuff.Author's Response: hehe, thanks! (: Report Review
Nice one shot buuut...victoire is actually younger than teddy by a year or twoAuthor's Response:
haha. thankyou, I'll keep that in mind. :P
for next time. :) thanks again for the review! Report Review
this is really really really really good and abousolutly hilariouse!
I really enjoyed it and couldn't help actually laughing out loud
wow this is really great
wow thanks xx :) xxAuthor's Response: Thankyou! ^_^
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SAMMM! it's kriss.
this story was amazing!
you had me in stitches the whole time
loves it (:Author's Response: Krisss.(:
glad you did, tooo.
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Hahahahaha! I LOVE it!!! It's hilarious! :D Um...I don't really think I have a favorite character - they were all hilarious! :D Love it!
~Emily~Author's Response: Em! :D
aww. thankyou, love. (:
glad you did.
ily! Report Review
HAHAHA. ahahaha. aha. HA. :D
i loved Roxanne most. :)Author's Response: haha, thanks. :] Report Review
Here's the scope with mines. I have bout 30 or so cousins. My mum is the oldest of 8, dad is the second oldest of 4. Just imagine all the great blackmail I have. Though, the holidays are chaos (Not CHAOS, there's a difference you see), and the gag gifts are something worthwhile (Jesus Puzzle, ugly blanket, long johns, just to name a few.) Be glad that you're the sane one. Their is rarely any in my family.Author's Response: God.
that's awesome. :D
I really (really) wish I had a huge family.
My mum has 1 sister, 3 brothers. My dad has 1 brother, 3 sisters. Typical.
Half is in Canada, here. and the other half, my mum's side, is in Lebanon. :/
Together, we'd be around 20. :P
But 30? That's a lot. :D
Still, I wish I had that much. Report Review
That's my family, something like that happened a while ago, good times.Author's Response: Lucky. :D
I wish I had a family like that.
I'd be either Molly or Lily with the make up, I think. (:
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lol, that was so funny! i loved it! good job!Author's Response: Thankyou for your review, Sarah! :D Report Review
I have an account but I don't feel like signing in. Just wanted to say this is cute. I got a little confused in some places because I kept mixing up the kids names and what they were doing. I ignored it and kept reading though, so whatever! Good job though, the perspective of the story and the writing style fit with Teddy's 14 year old outlook nicely. :)Author's Response: Ugh, tell me about it. I had problems on my own, at the time. But as an author, I couldn't ignore them, so I had to go back and read. At a point, I mixed up ALL the names. I was screwed. Gaah. But now I'm kinda caught up. ;)
Really? :D I didn't notice that. (:
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Tee hee! I've always been so grateful that my three kids are angels. It's nice to read about a group of holy terrors!Author's Response: Haha :P
May they stay angels forever (:
You don't want them being like the Weasley/Potters. :D
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THAT WAS SO FUNNY! I loved the part when roxanne only laughed at the the cahcos, and the part when lily put make up on fred, in all the wrong places! I loved itAuthor's Response: Haha. :D
I'm so happy you loved it. :)
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Haha! Great story! I loved all the characters and my favourite part was when Victoire took control lol! Well done! Are you going to do anymore like this (I hope)? Thanks!Author's Response: Thaaanks. :)
Vicky, Oh Vicky. Vic Vic Vicky.
Sorry. Right. Erm,
I like you :)
you know, and all my other reviewers/story fans. :D
And, I do things/write stories for people I like.
Well, I don't, but I can start! Many people had asked if I'm writing more like this.
[By 'many', I mean 2 or 3 ;)]
Sooo.. I'm not entirely sure what you mean by 'like this'. I was thinking maybe... prolly another story/ one-shot that would be when Teddy babysits again? That would be good, right? Oh my, i'm starting to even get good ideas :D
Alright, that it is.
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Avada Kedavra!!! AHH. I LOVED the part when Teddy asks us how the whole scene would look to Victoire, ad=nd hten contnues to nameeverything around them. HAHAHA. I abslutely love Roxanne. I would have been doing the same thing :)Author's Response: Eeeep! I love it when you tell me your favorite bits! Thankyou so much! :)
I'm flattered you loved it and Roxanne :P
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I liked Roxanne best- sense of humor! I really loved this!Author's Response: I love laughter. :D
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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i loved your story
it was hillarious
i liked Teddy and Roxanne the bestAuthor's Response: I'm glad you think so :D
Teddy, Oh Teddy and the laughing Roxy. :P
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I loved Roxy! That would have been me! Laughing my head off! I liked it when Victorie said she used the killing curse. That was so funny! Ah I loved it! You should make more like it! Anyway I was wondering if you would mind making me a banner for my story, When a Black loves a Jenson they get a Veralidiane Gretchen Frenzied?! Please you did such a wonderful job last time. :-] [-;Author's Response: Yeah, Roxy was my favorite :)
I actually got inspired by my sister. She laughs at anything. Lame or funny. :P
Sure! I'd love to make you another banner! It could get a bit tiring to do it on this site, so you could e-mail me on:
melimelo30001 @ hotmail. com
Just take off the spaces, and thanks bunches for you review! ;) Report Review
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