Wow. This has been an amazing journey. This is probably one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I've ever read. The writing is great (better in first person, but still really good in third), the characters are so in depth, and the plot is one of the most creative ones I've seen, and I've read a LOT of Harry Potter fanfics, haha. It's been an amazing few days- the first of my summer vacation- as I worked my way through these happily long chapters. So, I'd like to thank you once more for writing this story. :) I'm sorry I've probably reviewed less than ten times, but there's only so many times I had enough time to review AND read more of this epicness.
Once again, thank you.
-MagykNargle

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Sure, just break my heart and feelings like that; it's alright. Aww, this is so sad. I'm not a fan of over-dramatics, and it's too late at night for me to try. So no, this wasn't my favourite chapter- not at all- but this story is amazing, so that makes up for it. ^^ The writing is still great.
Thanks,
MagykNargle

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Oh, my gosh. This chapter was even more amazing and horrifying than usual. Fatal disease... aw, drat. Whatever I was expecting, it wasn't that. This curse, however, has made this story even more incredible and unique. It's beyond original, and it's great- though not so, obviously, for Katie. I can't help but make the random connection that Katie Bell was cursed, too. Haha, coincidence, I suppose. Anyway, this story just keeps getting better and better! Great job! :D
Thanks,
MagykNargle

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Eeehhh... Todd scares me.

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This story is so brilliant... but I'm really confused. I feel like I should know what this curse Katie has is... but I don't. I suppose I'll find out next chapter or something...? Anyway, once again I want to tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. It's great enough that it's exactly 3:00 am and I'm still reading. It's that good.
The writing is very good quality, and I've barely seen any typos. The plot is INCREDIBLE and unique and overall amazing. The characters are so well developed. Everything about this story just screams 'GREAT!'
Thanks again for this awesome piece of literature,
MagykNargle

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I'm sad, 'cause a lot of the chapter images have been broken... just thought you ought to know, because I'm sure others want to see the characters just as much as I do. Oh, and you broke my feelings with the Emily thing this chapter. It's just so sad. But you know what I love about this story? The characters are just so /real/. It's not all fluffy and cliche, and the people have real friendships and relationships and everything. It's really great. So, I feel sort of bad that I've only reviewed three times in seventeen chapters, but I suppose I'm being selfish; I'd rather keep reading than leave feedback. Anyway, great story! ^^ I'm looking forward to the rest of it!
Thanks,
MagykNargle

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I can't... even... I'm in love with this chapter. It's so brilliant and hilarious and sad all at once. I think it's my new favourite. So thank you. xD Great job! Michelangelo was amazing.
Thanks again,
MagykNargle

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This is a great story! I'm really enjoying it. The writing is great and hilarious, and I love the entire plot line. If I didn't want to get as much of this story read RIGHT now as I can, I'd leave something longer. Maybe later... Anyway, excellent job!
Thanks,
MagykNargle

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I base my life on this story. It means almost as much to me as the real HP serie. I just wanted to thank you for making my life interesting. I owe you so much.

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I base my life on this story. It means almost as much to me as the real HP serie. I just wanted to thank you for making my life interesting. I owe you so much.

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That was SO funny! I cried!

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*Excited gasp* That was AMAZING! I finished this story in a record (for me at least) 8 hours. I was enthralled I couldn't stop reading. You are amazing!
Since I'm a meany I'm gonna add in a few constructive criticisms.
The whole bad luck spell seemed a tad far fetched in my opinion. I didn't find it particularly believable. But it was a big part of your plot, well really it was your whole plot.
I also think you should have had a bit more focus around Albus. Yeah you had Katie being obsessed with him, but we didn't really find out much about his character throughout the story. Which I found a little disappointing.
But really it was very good. I'm a tiny bit disappointed that Fred and Katie didn't get married for real. I could just see them watching little Michelangelo and tiny Pez playing in their backyard. Of course they would name their child after the Frouse that brought them together.
Anyways my tiny daydream is a little of track. I really did love your story. I think Katie was an amazing character, and I'm impressed with the character development she had going for her. You're a good writer. Be proud. Thanks for the amazing story, and for giving Hufflepuffs a better name for themselves. They are not cowards, and you proved that.
Good job Layla.

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OMG I CANT BELIEVE THIS STORY IS FINISHED!
This is such a good story, I loved it so much!
I hope you write a sequel, although I dont know what you'd write about...anyway the point is you are such an amazayn author and I loved this story:)
Please continuing writing and I hope you enjoy it too...

I actually still can't believe that this ended, even though I finished this story last month...I just had to come and review it and tell you that I love it so much! I can't believe Indiana died and I can't believe Todd would be that evil! The curse thing was such a good idea and I loved all the characters and everything about the story:)

LOVE THIS!

-iatevoldysnose

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I LOVE THIS STORY!

-iatevoldysnose

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great chapter this one! though I want to apologize for the review left in chapter 1! reading at 3am can mess your brain so I only realised it was April Fool's joke until morning! :P lol^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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I'm going to read chapter 3 but on chapter 1 and 2, I've noticed some words that finish with the word eyebrow or in this chapter (chapter 1) the word chgarden? I'm loving the story so far but I was wondering why some words are written like that, for example Draco Malfoy married Astoria Greeneyebrow... going to keep reading the story and loving the story so far and also I love how clumsy Katie was when she fell off the train.^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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OMG is this real? Has it finally finished? I'm crying. I'm honestly crying.

I've got to admit, when I first started reading this story, I just thought it would be 51 chapters of intense angst, romance, and a whole heck of drama. What I did not expect was Todd sodding Williams and deatheaters escaping, and the whole Katie curse thingy. This is probably the most originaly plot I have ever read! And I don't normally review stories (check if you want) and tell them that, so take that as a compliment!

Grace, you created such a magnificent story and developed unique traits for each and every character (canon or not), and for that, I thank you. And thank God it was a happily ever after ending, or else, I would have had a rant in this review!

So to end it, I'll miss reading this story everynight and I'll miss reluctantly going to bed and wondering what happens next and planning the unfortunate death of Todd sodding Williams!

Thank you Grace! x

P.S - What's up with Fred and Sabriel? I see romance in the air. What would it be? Er - Frabriel or Sabred?

P.S - I'm now going to check if there is a sequel (fingers crossed there is)!

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The Head Girl?

Hahaha, its funny that Katie ignored that one particular fact and take on the bliss of Albus Potter standing up for her.I like her! She's adorable :)

Thanks

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I loved reading Sabriel's point of view. No matter how horrible she can be, she's still awesome and she's just as self-conceited as his brother : )

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OH GODRIC, I really didn't expect that. Argh! It's horrible! Poor Indiana, and Scorpius, he's so stupid! How could he not believe her? How could he think she was capable of killing someone?
I hope Katie is taking Veritaserum or just allowing them to see her memories!

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I really liked this chapter. I love Katie, she has an incredible personality and she is hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing at all the Michelangelo thing.
I think Eric should have forgiven the Potters, I think it wasn't really their fault, they had never pretended to do harm and what they did was understandable.

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Your writing is incredible! I've been having lots of fun reading about Katie and her clumsiness, she reminds me of Neville.

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I am currently working on digging a hole in which to bury Todd Williams. I'll let you know when it's deep enough ;D
Lovelovelove this story !

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Your sense of humor is hilarious! I love Wallace :D

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well... dont know why everyones being mean to each other... guess thats just the way it works hu... and i felt bad for eric when he looked crushed but i guess it is his fault and wonder whats gonna happen between emily and katie... anyway nice chapter!

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