gREAT PLOT BUT WORK ON YOUR SPELLING I FOUND A "THONG" THAT SHOULDVE BEEN "THING" AND A COUPLE OTHERS BUT STILL GREAT JOB! Report Review
Heya. Thanks so much for liking Evil Within It's Pages 2, I haven't written it for YEARSSS but I will see what I can do for you. I've been working at Uni and on other things like original stories and other Potter fics. However, looking back at this site I realised how much I'm letting others down and how much I have missed this wanderful site! Rachel :) Report Review
You have written a solid story; it is well paced and believable. Its impact would be so much stronger if you would go back and correct the obvious typos and spelling errors that distract the reader. A simple run through the spell check function would take care of most of them. Report Review
oh I LOVE it! 10/10 no doubt! Report Review
Please consider the use of a spell checker. In some spots it was almost incomprehensible. Report Review
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