That is a beutiful story,
I love to see a soft side of Draco,
And Luna was perfect...Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was worried about my Luna characterization, so I really appreciate feedback on her :) Report Review
I just wanted to let you know that this story has been plagiarized by Hatter4Life22 on the website Mibba(dot)com. I recently found out that my own story was as well so I thought of checking on the author's other stories to see if they were also the case. Best of luck!
QPAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the head's up! I think she's been removed now. Thank goodness. Some people are just crazy :P Report Review
This is so adorable, definately a favorite. The way you describe Draco's feelings and surroundings make the story seem more realistic, and the way he remembered Luna was exactly what you would expect from her, great job! :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! That really means a lot to me, especially for Luna. She's always been a very difficult character for me to write. :) Report Review
Wow, that was beautiful, very well done. It's nice to see a compasionate side to Draco.Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! :) Report Review
At first I thought that you were talking about now Draco was married off to someone else and not to Luna. but then the end comes and I had to reread a couple of times to get the most important information out of this funeral setting, that Luna has died and that Draco was only remorsing. Or am I wrong. Aha it was confusing to me but hhis one shot was just too tempting, the details just pulled me in and I had to keep reading ;)Author's Response: Oops! Sorry! I was trying to make it mysterious, but I guess it got a little confusing in the process. I'm glad that you liked it anyway, though! I really tried to work in details for this story, since that's usually my weak point. Report Review
This was absolutely touching, because I can see this actually happening. Luna is a sweet soul, and she WOULD probably have the goodness and courage it takes to approach Draco Malfoy and bring him back up.
Absolutely wonderful, and I'm surprised there aren't even more stories with her. I was nearly to tears by the end because it was very touching. You did a wonderful job.Author's Response: Thank you! I've only written one other Draco/Luna, but it was a very long time ago. I just think that their balance is so perfect and endearing, and I'm glad that you found it realistic. Luna is always difficult for me to write, too, so I'm glad that you enjoyed her. Thank you so much for your thoughtful review :) Report Review
this story is absolutely beautifulAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for your review! :) Report Review
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