Um, well that was interesting but there are numerous amount of spelling errors and if you are going to write this i think you should continue it so that Lily has to be sent back home.Author's Response: ok thanks for the input! Report Review
hey!! this was sweet. There were just a few spelling and grammar issues that I spotted, one being that when somebody talked like..."Hello," she said, you putt he comma outside it. When she says "I'm not to young," or when her brother says it, the "to" here should be "too". But I would of liked to read more on what happened to Lily when they found out what she had done...it just kind of ended :) keep writing.Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I will write more asap! Report Review
navigation
home
search HPFF read stories write stories login/register get help site links forums podcasts Terms of Service Site Rules contact us
categories & genres
Genre: - crossover - drama - fluff - general - horror/dark - humor - mystery - romance - action/adventure - angst - au - young adult
Popular Pairings: - harry/ginny - ron/hermione - james/lily - draco/hermione - more...
Format: - one-shot - short story - novella - novel - short story collection - songfic
quick links
my account ToS random story site rules help merchandise
fanfictionworld.net
