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Review #1, by AisforAmy Giving you up

30th March 2013:
Both Hermione and Draco are so immoral and weak that I'd prefer they stick together purely so no one else has to put up with them.

Fics like this make wish they had both died in the books.

Author's Response: Well, I've been exploring a few possibilities of them getting together. There's Ron leaving Hermione on The Truth That Lies Beneath, there's Draco and Hermione unattached in college and becoming best friends on Unexpected and there's them both cheating on their spouses in this one... If you have any other ideas, please challenge me!!!

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Review #2, by bookworm530 Giving you up

26th March 2013:
Oh no! Well hopefully is Hermione sees how much she missed Draco, she will chose him. Update soon!!!

Author's Response: It's not over! I'm about to finish next chapter.
Tks so much!

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Review #3, by Harveyboy Giving you up

25th March 2013:
Oh no! I wasn't expecting that ending...I am so sad...this can't be the end.please write an epilogue...on the positive side I think your writing is very good and I will look out for other stories written by you in the future...

Author's Response: Not finished, wait up! There's more drama coming soon. Tks!

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Review #4, by Harveyboy It was only a kiss

25th March 2013:
This was another great only critisism being, I wish hermione had gone to see Draco sooner after the kiss..must read what happens next...

Author's Response: She wanted to, but I thought her guilt wouldn't be as convincing if she did... Tks for your review!

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Review #5, by Harveyboy Unbearable

25th March 2013:
This story is the way you have written dracos charector and both their situations are very feasible as I've always thought hermione and Ron are more brother and sister...I'm glad you haven't made Ron have an affair or turn selfish and nasty like a lot of stories I have read...I think you have kept to the real charector of Ron. I am very interested to read I will...

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Review #6, by slytherinangel87 Unbearable

26th March 2010:
Awesome story I love it

Author's Response: tks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Review #7, by GINNYWEASLEY_HARRYPOTTER It was only a kiss

7th February 2010:
uh oh cant wait til the next chapter.

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Review #8, by Rose It was only a kiss

11th January 2010:
i just watched revolutionary road and this is written in a very similar style. absolutely loved it, definitely the best story i've ever read on here just because it made me feel different, it wasn't predictable. thank you so much :)

Author's Response: Flattering! Thank YOU so much!

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Review #9, by noona Unbearable

8th January 2010:
OhmyGod...I love it .. PLZ Do update the story and add chapters .. This is Great ..

Author's Response: I'm really trying to come up with a 3rd chapter that doesn't sound corny or bridges of madison county like...
If I manage to find some idea that doesn't ruin the rest, I'll submit it!

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Review #10, by darkness falls It was only a kiss

25th December 2009:
I seriously like this story. It ended beautifully. It was good. Great even. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Wow - that's such a great Xtmas gift! Tks!

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Review #11, by CharlieLow It was only a kiss

17th December 2009:
Wow this was a pretty good story for a Draco/Hermione one (:
I felt so sorry for Ron though =/

Author's Response: That's the bad part...
Post Hogwarts Dramiones only work with mean Ron or poor Ron - I'm glad you like it!

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Review #12, by thisloveisnice It was only a kiss

17th December 2009:
that's so sweet and romantic!!!

its just perfect!

Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate it!

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Review #13, by Kitkat Unbearable

29th November 2009:
VeryInterestingILikeIt. WhatTheNextChapter?

Author's Response: It wasn't supposed to have a second chapter, but I'm working on one.
Hope you stop by to check on it!
Tks, Diva

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Review #14, by dead_poet Unbearable

28th November 2009:
hey there,

i really think that your short story was very nics :)
you showed us a different hermione - a woman who has grown-up from a brave girl to a very loyal personality. i really like the fact about her. she's strong because she don't want to rip a huge family apart. at the moment i can identify with her.
your draco was well in character.

good job!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's tough to come up with credible ways to break Ron 'n Hermione up!
I'm glad you like it!

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