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Review #1, by fan Chapter 3: Misunderstandings

26th January 2010:
NOTE:This reiew is for the entire story up until ch. 3

That ending was so funny! Please update really soon!
love always,

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Review #2, by amazingshelbers Chapter 3: Misunderstandings

10th December 2009:

I love your story, you better update soon or else I'll have to hurt you. Also, I just started working on Chapter 9 of my story. Teehee!

Author's Response: Heehee :D Thanks Shel! I'm so old now. :( next year I'll be legal. -_- ugh.
Psh please. You're not gonna hurt me. Who's gonna hurt who is me if you stop sending me chapters. I'll harass you at school. Watch me! I'll crush you! :D heehee.
Thanks for the review Shellerrrsss!!
(Christmas break will give me more time to actually write more!)

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Review #3, by miss_aurora Chapter 3: Misunderstandings

9th December 2009:
Sloan is just too... well, annoying? And I wondered why Rose didn't defend herself from the false accusation. This chapter is just as interesting as the previous one, especially the last part. Lol, poor Rosie as she missed the note because of Scorpius.

Thanks for the update :D

Author's Response: lol! No problem :D I agree that Sloan is annoying and Bi**hy. :D Rose isn't the type of person to worry about such false accusations, that's why she defended herself. I know. :( Scorpius is terrible.
Thanks for the review hunn!! :D I'll try to put the next one up after my other story gets updated!

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Review #4, by amazingshelbers Chapter 2: Secrets

25th November 2009:
Scorpius is so hot when he's ticked off. Lol. I love your story so far ChuChu! Better update it and email the chapters when you finish! :D

Author's Response: lol. I know. I couldn't get him any hotter on paper then how I had him in my mind, but oh well. He's still hot anyway. :D And thankers Shel. I'll most definitely send you chapter 3, but don't forget our deal. You send me one, I send you one. :D

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Review #5, by amazingshelbers Chapter 1: The Knight Bus

16th November 2009:
I read this before everyone else so. =P!
I really like it so far. And since I let ChuChu read my story before it was validated, she better do the same for me. Got it? Good. I am glad I got that off my shoulders. PEACE, WORD!

Author's Response: LOL!! Of course Shel :) I can't forget about you!! peace? word? I'm tired of hearing you say it and now you have to write it? "Word, word!" Quit reading over my shoulder. >:[]

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Review #6, by lunas_quibbler Chapter 1: The Knight Bus

14th November 2009:
yes, first to review!
anyways, so far i'm enjoying it. I can't wait to see how this is going to turn out, i really like Rose's character(she was so nice to the woman and baby!). I think their are a few spots where the wording could be better, but overall it was pretty good.

Author's Response: Aww thanks :) I really appreciate the review. At least someone reviews. :?
I know there are spots in the story that has terrible wording. I'm sure that happened when I was either falling asleep, or focusing on classwork when I wrote this. :o
Chapter two will be up soon! Well, it's in the process of validating. I have all of the Chapters pre-made, I'm sure I'm on Chapter 5 at the moment! Thanks again for reviewing!! (Wow... what a long response.)

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